Regeneration

each grain of sand, every molecule
has rested on Earth since time began
raindrops now fall and dampen my hair
once part of waves rushing through mom's hands
 
a universal tie binds us all
without exception, we are matter
comprised of resources long existing
our consciousness?  part of this batter
 
our self-destructive mannerisms
serve but to rearrange elements
ashes to ashes and dust to dust
will come to pass in a greater sense
 
every particle has its own place
in both our todays and tomorrows
for each bridge built, each new life born
from our world's past has something borrowed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 4:03 AM
Congratulations on placing in the “Anything Goes!” contest with this beautiful poem. Enjoy your glory! Smiles, Dane Ann
Arteaga Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 9:13 PM
congratulations carolyn on your lovely poem :D
Fraser Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 5:06 PM
I can read so much into this poem that it makes me smile big style. Not having read the poems entered in Deborah's contest, I feel I should as this piece is simply wonderful. To your fav's James, you bet > many congratulations Carolyn for this back to earth piece for Semaj to enjoy >> James,xxxx
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes" Love, Carol
Peranteau Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 7:45 PM
Astute write dear Carolyn ! One poem that should be caught between the cover and first page of a bible ! *smiles* Have a great night ! james
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 6:31 PM
Carolyn, this poem reminds me of "The law of the conservation of energy..." sounds familiar! And then there are my views that tie in as well. God created the order in the universe...the energy and its functioning...and us. We are all part of His light, His atoms, His energy, His electrons. We are as is everything in our universe, because of Him. Our Heavenly Father, God. Nice insights in this poem to make one think. Thanks for sharing. Love, Dane Ann
Freeman Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations on your excellent work in this gem Carolyn. Thank your for your gracious comments. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 5:55 AM
Very profound and thought evoking, Carolyn. Congratlations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie
Brumley Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Congrats on your win in Deborah's contest Carolyn!
Winter Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 5:22 AM
quite an awesome philosophical write Carolyn. so much truth, beautifully expressed. warmest congrats on your win - and thanks so much for your thoughtful comment. hugs, shar xoxo
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 7:37 PM
VERY wise ,this poem is, CArolyn. Very well done! Luv, Andrea
Cwiak Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 4:56 PM
Yes, we are universally bound together without exception...I love that line. Great write! Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work, but please note that my name is not Chris. (I will answer to "Hey you" sometimes...lol)
Neels Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 1:56 PM
Carolyn, I absolutely love this piece.. Has to go into my fav list, love Wilma
Culverhouse Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 7:40 AM
enjoyed
Guzzi Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 5:48 AM
so very true gal! tweak the 4th line at the very least..remove the "that" ;)...oh does dreaded that's!!!! LOL and I see you have a period aversion..but okies...all cap's in line beginning NO periods..I'll deal LOL
Knop Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 5:19 AM
Great write, Carolyn! The Buddhists have their wheel with no beginning and no end, a continued life cycle! Ejoyed your poem today and thank you for all your kind comments on my poetry...Love, Gert
Amah Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 4:32 AM
... o, Caro-lyn, dear! you voice recasts those unseen intents of nature & creation which the proud bluffs of humanity refuse to acknowledge ... all is lost that is gained! & of course what comes as new, beautyfuk or excellent, has been of old & has been ad-judged like rags ... what we find is the NEWNESS OF THE OLD!!! ride on ...Canny
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