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Regaining Sanity

REGAINING SANITY I wake up to the waft of a warm sea breeze, The rock and roll of waves entice and tease, The thunderous African sea crashes down, But beyond this crashing and prancing, There is calm, Where surfers pattern the ocean forming A majestic human crown! We go down to the beach, it is early morn, Sight two whales and a large Pod of dolphins Which leap up and dive, repeating this action, Within a fraction of a fraction Of a second, until they Reach their destination. A wild paradise where seagulls fly above, Squawking diving and looking eagerly For their next meal, Even if they have to steal, From their comrades! The tide goes out with a forceful current, I saw a fin lurking close to shore, Perhaps two sharks a formidable pair. But several dolphins narrow their path, The sharks disappear! We spend the morning lying on golden sand, The sea was inviting but the waves Still crashing, dancing, frothing And churning. The suns gentle rays, Tickled the ocean, As if they have swallowed A love potion! And the water sparkled Resembling little diamonds As they bobbed up and down, The sea looked like a dance ball and Ladies wearing brilliant ball gowns. We go back to our flat and sit on our Spacious balcony, Watching the ocean and relaxing, And regaining, redefining our sanity! Ordered sushi from downstairs and with A glass of wine, It’s definitely now siesta time!

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Date: 9/20/2020 6:19:00 AM
I know this is good. I read it and felt I spent the whole day at the beach myself. I am now very relaxed and refreshed! Great thing you do!
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Date: 10/21/2020 5:46:00 AM
Hi Duke, I'm glad you had a holiday, purs was overdue, first time I was really sad to come back, because although Corona is everywhere even by the sea, you forget for a few days and then its time to come back and be careful, mask,distancing. everything.Thank you dear friend for commenting. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Date: 9/7/2020 12:14:00 AM
A beautiful use of words for the sea. "The sea looked like a dance ball and Ladies wearing brilliant ball gowns." I loved the complete poem and the above lines. Perfect. Thank you dear Jennifer for sharing the amazing poetry.
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:07:00 AM
John, thank you for a wonderful comment. Are you Greek John? Yes seaside holidays are the best, and the sea was only a stones throw from where we were staying. we were on the 1st floor and the first thing I do when we go to the coast is open the sliding doors to hear the sea. Africa's sea is wild, rough and awesome and very noisy! Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
Date: 9/6/2020 11:48:00 AM
Love the way you expressed yourself...and the style of the write...
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:10:00 AM
Hows You Tube doing Arturo - are you enjoying it, thinking of doing the same but have no clue where to start, maybe you can advise me. Thank you for a great comment my friend, be safe. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/6/2020 10:29:00 AM
What a view, as seen through your eager and watchful eyes. I can almost feel the spray on my cheek. Uplifting to this landlubber. Thanks, Jennifer. :) gw
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:22:00 AM
Hi Gershon, you are almost right but experiencing Africa's wild beautiful sea, the waves just crash, you would have to be in the sea to feel the spray. We also have sharks but between 8.00 and 5.00 pm there are life guards, and there are nets further out at sea. There still is the occasional shark attack, just like in Australia. Thanks for a great comment my friend, be safe, blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/5/2020 8:33:00 AM
I think there is no better place on earth than the ocean for regaining sanity. Beautifully chosen words and imgery.
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:24:00 AM
Absolutely correct MLK dear friend - I adore the ocean also, so happy you enjoyed my poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/5/2020 4:33:00 AM
This mixture of captivating imagery, similes and use of personification is very beautiful, Jenny. Nature is the best medicine to calm and relax us, especially if life is being stressful. A fav for me ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/21/2020 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Paul for faving my poem -Seaside or mountains both good for us, the best medicine. I was in Greece on Honeymoon and it was Winter,I got bronchitis and the Greeks in the Pharmacies in Athens ask you how many antibiotics you want, so I said for three days, I eventually got very sick and we flew back home. My mom and dad were getting ready to go to Swaziland for a break, went to the doc. who gave me the proper medicine and in combination with the very hot weather I was better in 2 days. Keep safe Paul my friend, warm regards and hugs Jenny.
Date: 9/3/2020 8:56:00 PM
Jennifer, Enjoyed your verse in this poem. Surf and sand, and aquatic dreams sure to help you find sanity's course. And libations never hurt. -Richard
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Date: 9/4/2020 8:53:00 AM
Hi Richard wonderful to have you visiting and commenting on how to find my sanity - help stop the world I want to get off - but really, I am coping - between poetry and our business, find time for house work (thanks to Hubby's help).was spoilt up to lock down with a live in domestic work, but adapting quicker than I though I would. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/2/2020 9:27:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... lovely picture poetry Jennifer. Being observant is a poets secret weapon - thanks once again Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 9/3/2020 10:46:00 AM
Thank-you Lindsay, you are quite right but I love the wording that observing is our secret weapon - and the 'picture poetry' Be safe Lindsay, Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/2/2020 6:45:00 PM
Love the essence of this wonderful piece. The imagery you related was exuberant.
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Date: 9/3/2020 10:43:00 AM
Thank-you Michael for a brilliant comment - there is so much one can see down by the coast, but I'm certain your seaside holiday places also have Whales Dolphins, and of course Sharks - we had a wonderful holiday. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/2/2020 12:10:00 PM
Looks like you wrote what you saw and so descriptively... Sounds like an interesting day.
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Date: 9/3/2020 10:39:00 AM
Thank-you Silent One, Umhlanga Rocks is a very sought after holiday destination for both locals and tourists - it is absolutely beautiful and we go there once a year. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/2/2020 10:50:00 AM
Sounds like a lovely morning to me. Well told with beautiful imagery. I do love whales and dolphins. Great job here. It was almost like I was there with you. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/3/2020 3:22:00 AM
thank you my friend for an awesome comment - we love going down to this part of the coast becasue the flat is on the first floor with a big balcony and a barbecue facility and only two stones throw from where the sea starts or should i say roars! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/2/2020 9:50:00 AM
This is a descriptive, lovely piece with a smooth flow, Jennifer. Janice
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Date: 9/2/2020 10:27:00 AM
Thank-you Janice, a lovely comment - glad you enjoyed it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/2/2020 9:30:00 AM
It sounds like the beach near you is much like the one here, Jennifer. Always full of fun things to watch! Those seagulls will eat anything at all. (Dolphins once saved my aunt from a group of sharks.) A beautiful and relaxing write. Enjoyed immensely! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2020 10:26:00 AM
Thank-you Carolyn a very sweet comment - Dolphins are amazing - there was an article in the paper that due to Covid and the lock down,people did not go for holidays, finally a boat went out to sea last week with tourists, and the Dolphins surrounded the boat, people surmised that they had missed their two legged friends and were very happy to see them, squealing with delight. This comment is a fave for me Carolyn - great write, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/2/2020 6:32:00 AM
WOW! Sis, I don't have to go to the coast now you just saved me money, this was awesome!
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Date: 9/2/2020 8:25:00 AM
Hi Bobby,I described it as I did because I fantasize about going back sometime soon - it is just heavenly having a holiday at Umhlanga Rocks to the North of Durban. Dolphins we always see but whales only twice. Be well dear friend. Jenny
Date: 9/2/2020 2:30:00 AM
- What a beautiful picture you describe so vivid, dear sister Jenny :) - We were at sea with our boat last night before the sun went down, beautiful calm sea and beautiful sunset :) - Fished a little ... and got two small sharks on the hook ... they are protected and must be released - Have a wonderful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2020 6:43:00 AM
Hi thank-you my dear friend for commenting - how wonderful to live near the sea - and you caught two baby sharks - better look out for papa or mama, for the will be somewhere close - your house is beautiful and open, close to nature, it must give you loads of inspiration for your poetry. Stay safe and warm are you not you entering Autumn now, we are the opposite, we are entering Spring. hugs, blessings and love Sunshine Smile

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