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Refrain On the 6th

A luminescent pearl....Oh how I raved! Radiated in the hot noon of June's sun Aphrodite was relaxing on her pearly bed While her moony beams were radiating with Diana's chastity This hardened rounded tear of joy for my daughter on her wedding A luminiscent pearl to be broached on her heaving bosom as she took her vows! June 5, 2016 For Nette Onclaud Visual -3 *Aphrodite is the goddess of love, beauty and pleasure *Diana is the goddess of chastity

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Date: 6/8/2016 11:32:00 PM
I really like this, Balveen. I chose that picture as well.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/8/2016 11:46:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! Unfortunately I could not submit for two days because of some technical error, whereas I could enter other competitions.
Date: 6/5/2016 4:12:00 PM
Lovely, Balveen...very fitting for that image, and so beautifully written. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/5/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Sandra!

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