David Mohn Poet Free verse

Refrain On the 6th

My dreams - they swirl in lucent strands, 
  in colors born of whimsied thoughts.
       In wisps, an orange memory
wafts carelessly from childhood’s brume,  
 toward purple echoes plumed this day.
    In lucent strands, a story weaves.

                 04 Jun 2016
                    Visual #1
     THE BEST OF 6 - Poetry Contest

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Bl Devnath June 8, 2016 at 11:01 AM Beautiful poem read from you my lovely friend. Congrats on your win with placement. Loved always, bl

Sandra Haight June 6, 2016 at 5:22 PM Love your interpretation, and wonderful imagery, David. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

Laura Leiser June 6, 2016 at 5:01 PM Great interpretation of the visual, David! Congrats on your win :)

Jan Allison June 6, 2016 at 4:43 PM Beautifully woven words David congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Godwin June 6, 2016 at 4:36 PM David, I like your write very much and congratulate you on your win. You and your pen did a fine and touching job. CayCay

Nette Onclaud June 6, 2016 at 4:09 PM how you flow with this one and so well phrased.. congrats of on your fine win, david..huggs

Probir Gupta June 4, 2016 at 10:09 PM And a beautiful weave... enjoyed...