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Refrain on the 6th

My dreams - they swirl in lucent strands, in colors born of whimsied thoughts. In wisps, an orange memory wafts carelessly from childhood’s brume, toward purple echoes plumed this day. In lucent strands, a story weaves. 04 Jun 2016 Visual #1 THE BEST OF 6 - Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/8/2016 11:01:00 AM
Beautiful poem read from you my lovely friend. Congrats on your win with placement. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/6/2016 5:22:00 PM
Love your interpretation, and wonderful imagery, David. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Date: 6/6/2016 5:01:00 PM
Great interpretation of the visual, David! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:43:00 PM
Beautifully woven words David congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:36:00 PM
David, I like your write very much and congratulate you on your win. You and your pen did a fine and touching job. CayCay
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:09:00 PM
how you flow with this one and so well phrased.. congrats of on your fine win, david..huggs
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Date: 6/4/2016 10:09:00 PM
And a beautiful weave... enjoyed...
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