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There is beauty all around if we only take time to notice.

Refraction

 Refracting morn's light
Aurora Borealis
Beauty touched spirit
Sunrays pierce trees through forest
Moment captured forever

Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire
Contest: Forest Lights

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Andrea Dietrich

May 28, 2012 at 4:17 PM

How in the world did I never see this. And wow, sara, top place. Big congrats to you. it's a gem.

Barbara Gorelick

May 21, 2012 at 7:34 AM

Congrats Sara...its a beauty. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 21, 2012 at 7:26 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Ilene Bauer

May 20, 2012 at 3:36 PM

congratulations on your win with this lovely poem!

John Freeman

May 19, 2012 at 8:20 PM

Quite a beautiful take on the photo, Sara. The Aurora Borealis is an awesome sight. Congrats on first Sis. Agape, Moss

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

May 19, 2012 at 6:47 PM

This is fantastic Sara. Congrats on your first place win. Blessings and love, Rhonda

Joyce Johnson

May 19, 2012 at 5:04 PM

So happy to see your name at the top with this beautiful tanka. Congratulations dear Sara. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

May 19, 2012 at 3:47 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Harry Horsman

May 19, 2012 at 3:39 PM

congrats, Sara wonderful winner. harry

Gwendolen Song

May 19, 2012 at 1:29 PM

WOW!! What a powerful and accurate depiction of that snapshot, Sara! It is a beauty and worth the top spot! It makes sense to me now that those lights were the aurora borealis! Luv, Gwendolen

Samia Ali Salama

May 19, 2012 at 1:07 PM

Congratulations on your win Sara! Very lovely ...Samia

David Williams

May 19, 2012 at 12:23 PM

Sara congrats on your win..David

Joann Grisetti

May 19, 2012 at 10:46 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem. Truly beautiful, as is the photo.

Carolyn Devonshire

May 19, 2012 at 10:13 AM

Congratulations on your first-place win, Sara. Not only did Alexa and I enjoy the imagery and message, but you were the only one to correctly identify the lights as the Auroroa Borealis. We both loved your entry! Love, Carolyn

Dalila Agtani

May 14, 2012 at 1:31 AM

I can just imagine how beautiful the Aurora Borealis is! Are you from Alaska? I wish you good luck in the contest. Your kind comments are great inspirations. Love Dalila

John Rhinem

May 13, 2012 at 4:26 PM

Ps. Smile ˜ "This Is A Treasure As Your Beauty & Thank You, 'My Dear Beautiful Sara,' For Your Lovely Kind Visit * 'My Love, Forever;'" John!:) ˜

John Rhinem

May 13, 2012 at 3:54 PM

Smile ˜ Hi, Dear Sweeet Beautiful Sara * I Love Your Beautiful Poem, Tis A Lovely Thought This Image As That Of A Dream Wherein Love Shall Reside ˜ These Northern Skies &, 'Happy Mother Day Unto Your Beauty, My Love, Forever;'" John!:) ˜