Reformed Losers

Every word I write
must be right -- 
written to the best
of my ability; my 
product of honest 
thinking

Not a word penned
while blinking

To be perfect, is to be true

To be flawless is truly to
be you.

Every hope and aspiration
should be contemplated
with invested determination

Without driving will
there is no achievable way

(make every gambit
a fully invested play)

All winners are reformed
losers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Maverick Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 10:04 PM
Winners and loosers?? The world is full of such Some managing to reform" a conundrum pretty Much..' in winning or loosing?? The losses or Gains..I can't answer fully..Just what i feel Inside.' Ow my brain.!! Well wrote with massive Scope.)
DiMino Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 6:19 AM
Well, if there is original sin? Then we all start as losers, or lost, with a loving Father, giving us chance, knowing His Plane of lost-and-found. Blessings my friend.
Rose  Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 4:03 AM
none of us are perfect we are all reformed losers, and winners in the realm of experience and wisdom Joe, love this :)
DiMino Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 7:39 AM
Thank you, Vie; life teaches us more than books. Blessings my friend.
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 1:19 PM
I enjoy your poem.
DiMino Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 7:40 AM
Thank you, Hilda; blessings!
Lane Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Great perspective, Joe. I'm following the advice I've given in something I posted today, and you're the first I'm commenting upon after suggesting we show appreciation to flesh and blood poets.
DiMino Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, lin: outstanding, your recent poetic offering. Expressing wisdom and love. Enjoyed the read very much. True and inspiring.
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