Reflective

morn of sunlit dew…
jewels upon blades of grass
rainbow of dawn’s tears

© Harry J Horsman 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 8:25 PM
Simply adorable !
Deo Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 8:12 AM
that last line is the TWIST the SURPRISE Japanese experts look for ... or so I read. All three lines are wonderful, but the third makes me swoon (I wish I could have written it, but THANK U) shalom, shalom
Buehler Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 10:32 AM
A magnificent haiku, Harry. It is in my faves. :)
Jones Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 8:25 PM
You are really good a penning lovely haikus!
Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Oh, those little dewy rainbows of dawn in late June and July in the Midwest. How I miss them, and how brilliantly you've captured them. Bravo! :) gw
Goldsmith Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Your "Reflective" Haiku is a beautiful write. "Love It" Have a blessed autumn day writing away..............
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 4:34 PM
absolutely gorgeous
Cheney Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Very nice Harry, very nice.
Woodrow Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Wow! stunning :)
Lawless Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 9:04 AM
beautifully done Harry.
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 8:55 AM
absolutely beautiful on every level Harry, adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
Pandit Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Exquisite vocabulary, Harry. Beautifully crafted.
Poet Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 6:37 AM
Harry, you've written an incredible haiku with beautiful analogies and colors.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 12:57 AM
Well constructed haiku. Loved it.
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