Reflections On a Wall

Reflections on a Wall

From the valley floor
A stone arises,
Straight walls of polished blackness,
In between rolling, grassy knolls
Hidden in their cleft –
Arms open wide,
Welcoming pilgrims
Who in pilgrimage approach
It’s darkened face, 
Burdened by their tears
Written on a page, 
Wounded hearts, reopened,
In time and from far away
In air that hangs so somber, 
Yet so full, 
Like incense smoke,
Slowly lifting quiet sobs and farewell words
Into Heaven’s air
Until they meld
To final rest upon
The fragrant floral tributes,
As one clear voice of taps, 
Bidding youthful souls
And mourning hearts be one again
Within the granite wellspring bubbling up
Like a flame - eternal as the spirit sighs
That rest within the stone -
Where life reflects back to the living
In a visage blank - a void - 
Through the eyes of death
To see in the reflection
A mirror framed by silent tears
When hands held in mourning
Trace the outline of a signature,
Remembering the warmth shared
In first steps
Or love awakening,
Then reach out to touch the name 
Etched into the stone
Reviving life, 
Holding onto a youthful hand outstretched 
For one brief moment rejoined with life -
Two souls touch -
Then pulled away into that space
That all mortal flesh fears
To bid adieu again
Across the finite portal into eternity.   

Reflections on the Vietnam Memorial – Washington DC

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/11/2020 7:35:00 AM
Such a beautiful, touching verse, Mark, I think back to the friends and classmates lost in the war and wonder...why? John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/18/2020 12:44:00 PM
Hi John, Thank you for your message. My visit to the wall has left an indelible mark - especially knowing there are names I know.
Date: 2/9/2020 1:05:00 PM
Congrats Sam on your win--and on your tribute to soldiers who did not get the honor they deserved at the time--we sent them out to risk their lives, sometimes to loose their lives, and then we as a nation washed our hands of them.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/9/2020 6:35:00 PM
Exactly, LJ! Thank you for your contratulations and for your comments. The Memorial Wall is an amazing tribute - simple and eloquent!
Date: 2/9/2020 12:37:00 PM
wow, such poignancy, Sam. VERY nice writing. I have not ever been to DC but would love to visit this memorial and the statue of my hero Lincoln.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/9/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Visiitng the wall was a very emotional, deeply felt experience. I hope you get to DC. It is an amazing experience!
Date: 2/8/2020 8:54:00 PM
Very sensitive, inspirational tribute to and reflection upon the Memorial Wall, Sam... Gave me pause for thought and thanks. Cheers, Gershon
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/8/2020 10:57:00 PM
Thank you Gershon! My visit to "the wall" was unforgetable! Made me think and reflect. All the best, Sam
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