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Reflections On a Wall

Reflections on a Wall From the valley floor A stone arises, Straight walls of polished blackness, In between rolling, grassy knolls Hidden in their cleft – Arms open wide, Welcoming pilgrims Who in pilgrimage approach It’s darkened face, Burdened by their tears Written on a page, Wounded hearts, reopened, In time and from far away In air that hangs so somber, Yet so full, Like incense smoke, Slowly lifting quiet sobs and farewell words Into Heaven’s air Until they meld To final rest upon The fragrant floral tributes, As one clear voice of taps, Bidding youthful souls And mourning hearts be one again Within the granite wellspring bubbling up Like a flame - eternal as the spirit sighs That rest within the stone - Where life reflects back to the living In a visage blank - a void - Through the eyes of death To see in the reflection A mirror framed by silent tears When hands held in mourning Trace the outline of a signature, Remembering the warmth shared In first steps Or love awakening, Then reach out to touch the name Etched into the stone Reviving life, Holding onto a youthful hand outstretched For one brief moment rejoined with life - Two souls touch - Then pulled away into that space That all mortal flesh fears To bid adieu again Across the finite portal into eternity. Reflections on the Vietnam Memorial – Washington DC

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Date: 2/11/2020 7:35:00 AM
Such a beautiful, touching verse, Mark, I think back to the friends and classmates lost in the war and wonder...why? John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/18/2020 12:44:00 PM
Hi John, Thank you for your message. My visit to the wall has left an indelible mark - especially knowing there are names I know.
Date: 2/9/2020 1:05:00 PM
Congrats Sam on your win--and on your tribute to soldiers who did not get the honor they deserved at the time--we sent them out to risk their lives, sometimes to loose their lives, and then we as a nation washed our hands of them.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/9/2020 6:35:00 PM
Exactly, LJ! Thank you for your contratulations and for your comments. The Memorial Wall is an amazing tribute - simple and eloquent!
Date: 2/9/2020 12:37:00 PM
wow, such poignancy, Sam. VERY nice writing. I have not ever been to DC but would love to visit this memorial and the statue of my hero Lincoln.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/9/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Visiitng the wall was a very emotional, deeply felt experience. I hope you get to DC. It is an amazing experience!
Date: 2/8/2020 8:54:00 PM
Very sensitive, inspirational tribute to and reflection upon the Memorial Wall, Sam... Gave me pause for thought and thanks. Cheers, Gershon
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/8/2020 10:57:00 PM
Thank you Gershon! My visit to "the wall" was unforgetable! Made me think and reflect. All the best, Sam

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