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Reflections of You

time blurs our eyes view memories fade tis so true loves tears always new NEWNESS senryu Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Beata Agustin Syllable counter PS 5/7/5 28/01/22

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/18/2022 7:56:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/18/2022 8:23:00 AM

Thank you Alex, was delighted to make a placement, cheers David

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/18/2022 5:04:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your inspiring "Newness" senryu. God bless you.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/18/2022 8:22:00 AM

Thank you Beata for congrats and blessings, and indeed your placement, cheers David

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/29/2022 2:00:00 PM

Time does blur the past but sometimes a person an event or a place or even a name brings back a memory lovely Senryu David. hugs and blessings , Jennifer

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/30/2022 4:02:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer, even dreams can sometimes evoke some great memories, but only the good ones, nightmares are a different story altogether lol, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/28/2022 8:20:00 PM

David, you've written a fantastic haiku. You conveyed far too much information in only 17 syllables to consider. In the real world, time is slipping away, and we are in a cyclical relationship with it. Best wishes for the contest.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/29/2022 5:04:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad I do attempt to convey probably too much in succinct verse, but I think in this one the intended message comes through, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/28/2022 12:50:00 PM

So true David, time certainly blurs the past.. A lot said in a few words. Good luck in the contest. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/28/2022 1:15:00 PM

I think the essence of time healing is not entirely true, the reality being it merely blurs the past, but peoples love and the odd tear still shed remains real and new, cheers David