Reflections of September

The late afternoon casts a shadow upon the rangy summer grass
While they pick busily on weeds and seeds
Passing along is the season that moves so fast 

It must be an oasis of great height to them 
When they bend into the great green abyss 
So sweet, they are jumping from stem to stem 

If life was so simple as this, find your food then rest 
Rest yes, rest upon your limb 
And there you chirp so brown and trimly dressed 

Patience and I are but a guest 
While the warm days are at their abbreviated test  
No, neither a moment, nor a second in nature is wasted at best 

For change is inevitability 
So I shall greet the new light 
And watch as the sparrow adjusts in their tranquility
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 5/3/2009 6:37:00 PM
Laura, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:52:00 PM
Lovely poem, dear Laura, Best wishes to you in the final round. Lainie
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Date: 3/31/2009 6:33:00 AM
Congrats Laura on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/30/2009 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on having this beautiful poem make it through to the finals. Well done and best wishes for the final round. Love Heidie
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Date: 11/19/2008 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2008 2:50:00 PM
Nice use of contrast and imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 11/17/2008 12:41:00 PM
This is a tranquil, and serene poem. Sooths the soul, laura! Congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/17/2008 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations Laura, on the featuring of your wonderful poem "Reflections of September." Vince
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Date: 11/16/2008 11:51:00 PM
Congrats on your feature write this week Laura.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/22/2008 5:22:00 PM
I like the light-hearted feel of this poem. Nice use of personification. Fitting title for this piece. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/1/2008 2:10:00 PM
this is what God wants us to see. Him caring. nice write jhl
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Date: 8/29/2008 6:21:00 AM
This was a sweet peaceful easy feeling write. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 8/28/2008 5:08:00 AM
This is just so beautiful, it's actually serene as it produces a sense of calm upon reading. The imagery brings forth this feeling while the tone you set with these words is calming as well. Great effect and a terrific write. Michael
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Date: 8/24/2008 12:26:00 AM
Loved the imagery in these words Laura'Patience and I are but a guest 'Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 8/23/2008 9:21:00 PM
Very peaceful poem Laura - I just loved it - you captured nature beautifully in this poem - God bless
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Date: 8/23/2008 7:10:00 PM
Beautiful description of a summer's end, and a new beginning in September. It's almost here already, and I'll keep watch to see how the sparrow adjusts! Lovely write!....Carrie
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Date: 8/23/2008 5:53:00 PM
Love the sparrow. Love the change of seasons. A beautiful write as nature gets ready. Enjoyed! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/23/2008 4:26:00 PM
what a lovely and peaceful poem. thank you for reading my lighthouse and for your comment
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Date: 8/23/2008 3:56:00 PM
Hi Laurie what a lovely write, it screams of peace and tranquility, love it, take care D-nyce
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Date: 8/23/2008 3:44:00 PM
Dear Laura: This is a beautiful poem. Nicely written. Thank-you for reading my poem. I'm glad you liked it. Janice Herzog
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