Reflections of September

The late afternoon casts a shadow upon the rangy summer grass
While they pick busily on weeds and seeds
Passing along is the season that moves so fast 

It must be an oasis of great height to them 
When they bend into the great green abyss 
So sweet, they are jumping from stem to stem 

If life was so simple as this, find your food then rest 
Rest yes, rest upon your limb 
And there you chirp so brown and trimly dressed 

Patience and I are but a guest 
While the warm days are at their abbreviated test  
No, neither a moment, nor a second in nature is wasted at best 

For change is inevitability 
So I shall greet the new light 
And watch as the sparrow adjusts in their tranquility
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 3, 2009 at 6:37 PM
Laura, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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April 28, 2009 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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April 1, 2009 at 8:52 PM
Lovely poem, dear Laura, Best wishes to you in the final round. Lainie
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March 31, 2009 at 6:33 AM
Congrats Laura on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar
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March 30, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Congratulations on having this beautiful poem make it through to the finals. Well done and best wishes for the final round. Love Heidie
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November 19, 2008 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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November 17, 2008 at 2:50 PM
Nice use of contrast and imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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November 17, 2008 at 12:41 PM
This is a tranquil, and serene poem. Sooths the soul, laura! Congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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November 17, 2008 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations Laura, on the featuring of your wonderful poem "Reflections of September." Vince
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November 16, 2008 at 11:51 PM
Congrats on your feature write this week Laura.Rgds Brian
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September 22, 2008 at 5:22 PM
I like the light-hearted feel of this poem. Nice use of personification. Fitting title for this piece. Keep on writing! Karen
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September 1, 2008 at 2:10 PM
this is what God wants us to see. Him caring. nice write jhl
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August 29, 2008 at 6:21 AM
This was a sweet peaceful easy feeling write. God Bless. Vince
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August 28, 2008 at 5:08 AM
This is just so beautiful, it's actually serene as it produces a sense of calm upon reading. The imagery brings forth this feeling while the tone you set with these words is calming as well. Great effect and a terrific write. Michael
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August 24, 2008 at 12:26 AM
Loved the imagery in these words Laura'Patience and I are but a guest 'Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Jordan Avatar
August 23, 2008 at 9:21 PM
Very peaceful poem Laura - I just loved it - you captured nature beautifully in this poem - God bless
Richards Avatar
August 23, 2008 at 7:10 PM
Beautiful description of a summer's end, and a new beginning in September. It's almost here already, and I'll keep watch to see how the sparrow adjusts! Lovely write!....Carrie
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August 23, 2008 at 5:53 PM
Love the sparrow. Love the change of seasons. A beautiful write as nature gets ready. Enjoyed! Love, Shar
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August 23, 2008 at 4:26 PM
what a lovely and peaceful poem. thank you for reading my lighthouse and for your comment
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August 23, 2008 at 3:56 PM
Hi Laurie what a lovely write, it screams of peace and tranquility, love it, take care D-nyce
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August 23, 2008 at 3:44 PM
Dear Laura: This is a beautiful poem. Nicely written. Thank-you for reading my poem. I'm glad you liked it. Janice Herzog
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