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Reflections of Orange Sunshine

A pair of pears,stare up the stairs Watching hair, grow on the hare The city Mayor rides on his mare But stops to pay his fair, fare I see the fleas; into the sea flee Leaving much to the Imagination

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 4/30/2012 4:24:00 PM
Very nicely done and a pleasant title. :) Always, Laura
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Date: 3/15/2010 2:55:00 PM
like sister and brother, so but i believe you have a larger usage of words though. much love to you, always. -Always&Forever Your sister spirit Lynn
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Date: 10/11/2009 9:29:00 PM
Clever piece, HG! I like this's got me thinking of the many possibilities. Thanks for the inspiration! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/8/2009 11:01:00 AM
Bravo, HG! What a write you have here. It's great to see you posting again. I think the entire poem is filled with clever imagery! Love you! Carolyn
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:12:00 AM
HG my forever friend this is fasinating. Thank you for sharing it. Hope all is going well for you. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2009 9:21:00 PM
i love this orange sunshine:)well penned dear friend-Charma
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Date: 10/7/2009 3:30:00 PM
HG, Jordan is going to love are to funny. Lots of love..BG
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