Reflections of Orange Sunshine

A pair of pears,stare up the stairs
Watching hair, grow on the hare

The city Mayor rides on his mare
But stops to pay his fair, fare

I see the fleas; into the sea flee 
Leaving much to the Imagination
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 30, 2012 at 4:24 PM
Very nicely done and a pleasant title. :) Always, Laura
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March 15, 2010 at 2:55 PM
like sister and brother, so smart.lol but i believe you have a larger usage of words though. much love to you, always. -Always&Forever Your sister spirit Lynn
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October 11, 2009 at 9:29 PM
Clever piece, HG! I like this idea...it's got me thinking of the many possibilities. Thanks for the inspiration! Hugs, Donna
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October 8, 2009 at 11:01 AM
Bravo, HG! What a write you have here. It's great to see you posting again. I think the entire poem is filled with clever imagery! Love you! Carolyn
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 10:12 AM
HG my forever friend this is fasinating. Thank you for sharing it. Hope all is going well for you. Love, Carol
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October 7, 2009 at 9:21 PM
i love this orange sunshine:)well penned dear friend-Charma
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October 7, 2009 at 3:30 PM
HG, Jordan is going to love this..you are to funny. Lots of love..BG
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