Notes About The Poem

Written, October 14, 2015
Entered In The Contest, “Mirror Poetry”
April 23, 2024
Sponsor, Sara Kendrick

Reflections


Quote No.1
   “As you live deeper in the heart~
        The mirror gets clearer and cleaner.”
                                     _Quote by Rumi

Oh God,
You have created me
In your image and likeness-
The mirror of your love.
What do you see
When you gaze upon me?
Your image and likeness?
Or just a hazy semblance
Dulled by the sticky film that forms
On a mirror left unattended?
Your image is surely there, Lord.
Teach me, I pray,
To faithfully cleanse away that film
Which obscures the clarity of you-
Those everyday pollutants 
That distorts your reflection-
So that, what you are
And what you see in me,
Are clearly, one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Croft Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 5:45 PM
Lovely, congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 1:20 PM
I like the spiritual component to this one. Thanks for entering it in my contest. Way to go. Congratulations on your placement. Sara K
Mutindi Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 4:53 AM
Love this one Sandra, Congrats on your placement!
Haight Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 9:04 PM
Hi Grace, thank you so much for stopping by to read my poem and for your lovely comment and congrats! Much appreciated! Sandra
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October 18, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Sandra, Nice to see you on Silent One's winning list. Congratulations on your win. --SKAT
Haight Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. Your visits and comments are much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 2:05 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this exquisite write Sandra!
Haight Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, thank you for stopping by with your supportive comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Wigley Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 1:31 AM
Love the use of reflections in your reflection, Sandra. Congratulations on a lovely write. Viv x
Haight Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 6:50 PM
I appreciate your visit and nice comment and congratulations, Viv. Thank you so much. Sandra
Y. Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 7:06 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Many congrats on your win Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 6:49 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Lindsay Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 11:35 AM
How lovely; this could easily sit alongside the best of the Psalms. ( Perhaps Psalm 63? ) King David himself would have been proud to have penned it. Blessyer x
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 4:53 PM
Hi Bill, thank you so much for your visit to my poem. I do appreciate your supportive and meaningful comments so much! Sandra
Godwin Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 11:13 AM
Sandra - this poem is truly beautiful, a well-written reflection of my own heart and thoughts. I enjoyed this 'sweet touch' so very much ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 4:54 PM
Hi CayCay, I am so pleased you enjoyed my reflections poem. Thank you so much for your support and meaningful comments. Hugs, Sandra
Romaine Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Hey Sandra, stopped by for a visit. a very deep and introspective poem with questions surely answered in Christ's reflection in you for He is who our Father sees in us. Excellent writing and expression and best wishes in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 4:56 PM
Neva, I so much appreciate your visit to my poem and I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem and identified with it. Thank you so much! Hugs, Sandra
Christian Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 10:43 AM
very nice. Amen
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 4:56 PM
Hi Diane, I appreciate your visit, and I thank you for your positive comment. Hugs, Sandra
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