Reflections

Far from urban chaos, plastic and Styrofoam
The stream tumbles as it has for untold years
Trout swim with joy in their pristine home
Clear water, falling from those virgin tears

This is the land of Hiawatha, with mountains grand
The deltas of the Nile;  home of desert nomads free
The place of whales, the wonder of Van Dieman's land
Lands that twist and turn and bring forth poetry

Yet, reflected in the blue that seeps between our fingers
We see the utter magnificence that man has wrought
Wonders that leave us with an awe that lingers
Conquering many secrets that for so long we sought

Sip the water once again ; in its taste rejoice
And remember, we are tomorrow's only voice

For Carolyn's contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bechter Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 10:03 AM
When compassion gives birth to intelligence rather than the other way around then life would be lived in much a simple mannar. Enjoyed very much, reading you're write. Take care,Gary.
Null Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 7:20 PM
Congratulations Barbara, this is beautiful....Karla
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 2:28 PM
oh, wow, I love THIS One, Barbara. What a neat poem you came up with!!
Brown Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 6:04 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "The Power in Your Hands". Love, Carol
Lacey Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 4:11 PM
how true that is :)
Goff Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 3:43 PM
uplifting... you wrote with elegance! BG!....from the banks of Hiawatha Creek in Minneapolis! jimbo
Falotico Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Great job and win... wonderful write!!! Michael
Fraser Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 12:12 PM
What an enjoyable read Barbara, and definately deserves it's place on the winners podium >> James,x
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June 23, 2010 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations on your success in the contest Love, Iolanda
Johnson Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 11:26 AM
A beautiful poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations, My Lady. On this worthy presentation of success, Barbara. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Excellent interpretation of the photo, Barbara. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Falotico Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 6:48 AM
Wonderful write... a winner for sure in my eyes... good luck
Taylor Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 9:06 PM
Outstanding write, Barb. Lots of luck in the contest. Thanks for your comments. ... Ralph
Belt Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 9:00 PM
An Awesome write Barbara.....good luck in the contest.....Larry
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