Reflections

Reflections Reflections off the fountain’s water dancing on the garden wall amongst the trails of Boston Ivy turning red with coming fall. Impending changes of the season whispered softly in the air, foretelling nature’s morphing moments baring all for us to share. With Autumn’s beauty so refreshing painted brightly on display, one’s left in wonder of the season, treasured moments of this day. The cooler morns that greet each day and sheafs of wheat stacked in the lea; reflections of the season’s changes proudly shown for all to see. Yet as I ponder Nature’s beauty on display before my eyes, my thoughts are drifting deep in mindscape, dreaming of some prior skies. Reflections of those bygone seasons dancing softly in my mind, and dreaming of those long lost pleasures now forever left behind .
October 9, 2023

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Date: 11/14/2023 4:05:00 AM
Love your rising reflections of the Fall!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/14/2023 7:06:00 AM
I 'm glad you enjoyed, Maggie, thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. Hugs.
Date: 10/11/2023 7:55:00 PM
Your words dance along the page, with such elegance and grace. Autumn’s beauty is so refreshing, and it leaves me in complete awe. Each reflection is like poetry in motion. You've created a masterpiece with your words, my dear friend. This is beautiful in every way. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/12/2023 3:01:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful thoughts and comments, Brandy. My reflections ARE poetry I motion, most of them anyway. Hugs, John
Date: 10/11/2023 6:03:00 PM
Masterpiece!!! The work was done and I love it. Il's getting hard to find stuff to keep you awake. But if it rhymes and comes out good it may pass the test of time I'll fav this one.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/12/2023 2:40:00 AM
It’s always good for a poet to know his rhymes are not putting readers to sleep. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, I appreciate it. And thanks for saving it to your favs.
Date: 10/9/2023 5:01:00 AM
Hi John, it's a pleasure to read you this morning, and you're certainly correct about Autumn baring all to us. Her nakedness is exposed on branches of trees once they've been undressed by the wind. Even in her bare poses, she radiates brilliant beauty. Loving your lines, as always. I'm hoping you're well, my westerly friend.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/10/2023 8:12:00 AM
I did, John. Very much.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/10/2023 2:36:00 AM
Just like a beautiful woman, Nature’s beauty radiates. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments my easterly neighbor. Glad you enjoy reading my lines.
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