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Reflections

For thirst I went to wet my lips And knelt down by a stream, My reflection stared back at me 'Twas like a waking dream. I looked myself in the eye As it did the same, Who was who, which was what Confusion was the game. Was I kneeling, looking down Or was I drowning looking up, I cupped my hands, broke the spell And hurriedly I supped. I gathered myself up to leave As the ripples coalesced, My reflection began to reappear Swiftly then, I left. Entry for STRAND SELECT 9 ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 12/1/2020. Placed=2nd.

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Date: 1/16/2020 7:19:00 AM
Amazing write! Beautiful...and those ripples leaving with us, rippling beside us, for others to see. True reflection is a bottomless depth of quenching.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/16/2020 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Joe. :)
Date: 1/12/2020 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement! So well written - reality vs. perception spiraling us into that place where the lines blur!
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/13/2020 12:23:00 AM
Thank you Sam. :)
Date: 1/12/2020 6:00:00 PM
Great reflection on perception (Pun intended, of course). Wonderful entry for the contest, Gary. Warm wshes, Gershon
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/12/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. :)
Date: 1/12/2020 1:07:00 PM
Gary congrats on your win!;)
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/12/2020 2:07:00 PM
Thank you Brenda. :)
Date: 1/12/2020 12:24:00 PM
Your lines give pause for thought. Sometimes, when peering into a mirror, our reflection doesn't seem to be what we expect. A titch frightening. Good write, Gary.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/12/2020 12:34:00 PM
Thank you Lin. :)

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