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Reflection of Your Moon

Reflection of your moon Silent night I hear you whisper… Shadows of people in a moony night Little houses lit by candlelights. Tonight I am Vincent, I am as mad as can be... and I’m painting your picture for everyone to see. Wait night... wait don’t go away... I am not finished... I am scared......... I wont be here tomorrow for you! Oh what a beautiful night I want to hold you...... Squeeze you... feel you until forever....… Stay here with me let’s dream together.... Tomorrow will come and destroy our sand castle. There we stand at the edge of your mystic river, Wet feet gentle breeze you and me… And the moon is playing hide and seek..... Behind the transparent white clouds… This is just a dream.... Written especially for the contest: Poems about the moon

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Date: 2/27/2016 12:52:00 AM
Again, thank you for the nice reply to my comment
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Date: 2/25/2016 11:55:00 PM
Ali, a wonderful poem about the moon. the still whispers of the moon glide perfect with imagery... LINDA
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Ali Hammoud
Date: 2/26/2016 6:25:00 PM
Thanks. Sorry been a long time away from poetry soup. Glad you like it.
Date: 1/4/2016 1:25:00 PM
a beautiful poem...
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Ali Hammoud
Date: 1/4/2016 2:31:00 PM
thanks a lot. xxx
Date: 3/30/2013 8:24:00 PM
This is another lovely write of yours my dear friend Ali! I enjoyed reading it. thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/1/2013 3:04:00 PM
Beautifully written, Ali. Very romantic and heart warming.
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Ali Hammoud
Date: 3/1/2013 11:48:00 PM
Thank you Eileen ;) xoxox

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