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Reflection

Oh, innocence of trust unchecked How stare you back at me? T’was you who fled this heart laid bare Oh, barren calamity Empty now the heart ill used So used to gentle dreams No more to see the flower’s bloom No song but silence’s scream Tell me true, reflection mine Convince these naked eyes What errant way or walk or word Did scorn this heart and thine? Does not love, our love, true love Still soar above the weather? Or like Iccarus, did we dare too high Then, fall to earth unfeathered? I cast my lot on winds of change Though the end be hard to find His siren muse did have her chance Now...I shall have mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/4/2014 11:32:00 PM
Beautifully written Christopher... Verlena
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 3/4/2014 11:33:00 PM
Thank you, Verlena
Date: 3/4/2014 6:17:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win Chris, Nice job......Roger
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 3/4/2014 11:02:00 PM
Thanks Roger. I appreciate the post, bro.
Date: 3/4/2014 9:26:00 AM
Such smooth fluid cadence. Master strokes of pain evokes a smiling sigh indeed.
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 3/4/2014 11:03:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Mickey. I appreciate the feedback.
Date: 3/4/2014 12:19:00 AM
Well done and a winner. Congratulations. Love,Joyce
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 3/4/2014 11:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joyce. Blessings.
Date: 3/3/2014 1:03:00 PM
Nicely done Chris. Love the third stanza(quatrain) a nice see-saw pivot from hurt to healing.
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 3/4/2014 11:04:00 PM
Thank you for the feedback, John. Actually, more like a transition from hurt to resolve, I think.
Date: 3/3/2014 8:11:00 AM
Thought provoking write on betrayal. Congrats on the win, christopher
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 3/4/2014 11:05:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram. Which part did you find thought provoking?
Date: 3/3/2014 7:34:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Love the powerful last line.
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 3/4/2014 11:06:00 PM
Thank you dear. It was fun writing from the perspective of a woman who feels betrayed, and all of the emotions that must go with it.
Date: 3/3/2014 7:23:00 AM
Congrats on the win C.T.Britt .A great one is this.
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 3/4/2014 11:07:00 PM
Thanks a bunch.
Date: 3/2/2014 6:30:00 PM
I love a good quatrain Chris, and this is a great one. Take care, Richard
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 3/4/2014 11:08:00 PM
Thanks Richard. I love writing a good quatrain, and am always surprised for some reason when others like my verse.
Date: 2/27/2014 2:42:00 PM
lovely write indeed
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 3/4/2014 11:09:00 PM
Thanks Jack. I appreciate the encouragement.
Date: 2/26/2014 4:30:00 PM
Christopher, Now that's reflecting! I Like your style! 7 My best, chuck
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 3/4/2014 11:09:00 PM
Thanks Chuck. I appreciate the high regard..

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