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Reflecting Ripples

I stand alone a barking tree, where silent sorrows of ripples flee, No one hears my calamity, wearing weeps of my raped reality… Branches droop to ice-cold ground, solitudes surface of their drowned, Abysmal anguish of leaves have browned, lacrimal echoes of their sound. Randomized reflections of rivers flow, suffering scourges in their woe, Ripples raging in their row, creating cabalistic contrasts as they grow… The forest dense as to populate, the seeds of seduction must copulate, All is dormant until the eyes dilate, weeping willows that magistrate. I accept my life near the lamenting lake, weathering wounds as I wake, The wood whispers as to ache, secluded shadows share the snake… Wandering waters that ripples bring, vines that struggle in their swing, Alone in my salvaged spring, where sparrows segregate in their sing. Gif # 1 02.25.2020 Placed 1'st & POTD...Thank You
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Roper Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 1:14 AM
Back with big congratulations on your awesome win with this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Exquisitely well-done, W^W, beautifully rhymed and word usage was well-placed and artfully crafted and worthy to be placed as a first, my thanks for your participation, Aloha, William
Warrior Avatar
March 15, 2020 at 6:39 AM
Thank you, William...your contests are by far one of my favorites to enter...( cheque is in the soup mail lol )...all the best my friend...the Wingster...^WW^ :o)
Staton Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 7:56 AM
A wonderful read. I'm Faving this wonderful write!
Warrior Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 8:10 AM
Thank you so much, Valerie...and double thanks for the fav, my friend :o)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 12:08 PM
What a wonderful choice for POTD! Congratulations my friend! xxoo
Warrior Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 12:47 PM
Thank you so much dear Connie...
Messina Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 7:18 AM
Alone in your salvaged spring, I hope the sparrows sing... to you Wing-'ster. And may they sing you songs of forever happiness. Congrats on POTD. Love & Peace ^CM^ :o)
Warrior Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 7:26 AM
Thank you so much Charles...you are indeed a poetic brother :o)
Romios Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 4:39 AM
Dear Wingster, Was not on line so missed this glorious creation. Belated Congratulations! A POTD is truly an honour~ this write.....most deservedly so, my friend. Love****from my heart to yours! Pangiota Romios
Warrior Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 7:25 AM
Thank you so much dear Panni...love you too :o)
Watt Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Wings, yet more amazing words flowing from your pen. Hearty congratulations on having this powerful poem selected for POTD. Keep writing, brother! ~ John
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Thank you so much, Johnny Watts lol...
Y. Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 7:59 PM
WoW!WW, This is so beautiful and well written. Your content, imagery and rhymes were on point. This a poetic masterpiece! Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of day and best wishes in the contest. Ps, Take lil sis under your wings bro, so I can write even a small fraction of how you write:-) Alexis
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:31 AM
Thank you so much, dear sis Alex...
Kauffman Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 5:45 PM
Such a lovely poem filled with amazing images and masterful alliteration. It just flows in continuous ripples like the gif. Congratulations, Wingster, on your POTD!
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:31 AM
Thank you so much, Sam...
Lindley Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 4:56 PM
Congratulations on this excellent poem being awarded POTD my friend. Every verse a true delight to read. A definite fav too.... God bless..
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:30 AM
Thank you so much, dear Robert...
Godwin Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 4:32 PM
I believe we have a winner. Oh, I see it was honored as POTD - I couldn't agree more with that decision. An absolutely joy to read for it is fine poetry indeed. From start to finish, I loved it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:30 AM
Thank you so much, dear Cay Cay...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 4:16 PM
So happy to see a highly creative and gifted poet appreciated and honoured by dear fellow poets and friends.. Congratulations, Winged Warrior, on POTD honour! A well earned recognition! My deepest regards and blessings.
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:29 AM
Thank you so much, dear Besma...
Wanter Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 2:48 PM
Such evidence of talent. Congratulations!
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:29 AM
Thank you so much, Sunlite...
Turner Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations Wingman on POTD. Great images within these lines. Good luck old man:)
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:28 AM
Thank you so much, much older man lol
Sands Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations for POTD Wingster :)
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:27 AM
Thank you so much, dear Heidi...
Koplin Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 10:31 AM
Well written. Congratulations on potd. Surely to be at the top of winners.
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Thank you so much, Mark...
Nicole Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 10:30 AM
You have set the mood, and I can feel these moments- as this tree whispers softy ..to me. Beautiful POV poem here. Awake and alive, it soon will be. In Spring. Congratulations my Wonderful Warrior with Wings. :) On Poem of the Day. Ripples of emotions, indeed. ~ Brandy
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Thank you so much, dear Brandy...
Adams Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 8:39 AM
So happy to see this one as POTD. Congratulations on that WW. Hugs
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:25 AM
Thank you so much, dear Sandra...
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 8:34 AM
- Beautifully poem, W.W. - .Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Thank you so much, dear Anne-Lise...
Michael Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 8:03 AM
A lot of reflecting her, almost dazzling...a freestyle write...I like the play...Congratulations WW on POTD...
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Thank you so much, Arturo...
May Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 7:18 AM
Beautiful write WW, Congrats on POTD..
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:23 AM
Thank you so much, Joseph...
Onyancha Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 7:13 AM
Congrats, I was drowned in the sound
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:23 AM
Thank you so much, Peter...
Pandit Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 6:42 AM
Congrats WW on poem of the day--splendid imagery--a poem full of emotions.
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay...
Williams Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 5:29 AM
I am so happy to see this get POTD, congratulations my dear Warrior with Wings. Good on ya....Maria Hugs
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:21 AM
Thank you so much, dear Maria and for the fav my friend...
Cunningham Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 3:01 AM
Love your interpretation of the gif W. W.. Congrats on POTD, already a winner. Tom
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:20 AM
Thank you so much, Tom...
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