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Refined

Glowing, golden orb is lost, plunged into a molten fire. reduced to streaks of red and dross, victim of the night’s swift ire: refined, but not without a cost.
————— for the Bite Size Poem no.47 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier Written on 06/19/2022

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Date: 11/10/2022 3:11:00 PM
Well done, Jeff ~
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Date: 6/24/2022 3:08:00 AM
I was intrigued by this unique and imaginative piece Jeff. Well done! Congratulations on your second place win. Blessings xxoo
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 6/24/2022 4:30:00 AM
Thanks, Connie
Date: 6/23/2022 8:29:00 PM
"refined, but not without a cost" - Great philosophy. Congratulations!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 6/24/2022 4:30:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj
Date: 6/23/2022 8:24:00 AM
Nicely penned. Congrats to win. Blessings
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 6/24/2022 4:31:00 AM
Thank you, anisha
Date: 6/23/2022 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Refined" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 6/24/2022 4:31:00 AM
Thank you, Paula
Date: 6/19/2022 3:59:00 PM
Nature; beautiful, tragic, dramatic, and always inevitable. Thoughtful imagery, good luck in the contest...Jeff! Robert
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