Rednecks

Rednecks 
Long time ago when a man called Goldwater was 
running for president, I was walking along a road 
just outside Mobile, Alabama. What I was doing 
there is long forgotten but I recall having a day off 
from my ship, and going from bar to bar. 

I did notice that the sidewalk was weedy clearly
people did no walking. A pickup truck stopped, 
three burley men wanted to give me a lift, dared 
not refuse they had gun racks and armed for civil
war that steadfastly refused to appear. 

They asked me about Goldwater whom I had read 
about in “Newsweek” but I stated ignorance. 
They drove me back to Mobile and I assured them 
I loved America; gave me a six-pack, warned me 
not to speak to black people and commies. 

I was told they were rednecks; which I know see
as sort of countryside workers with broken cars
in the front yard. They did look like the men who 
bullied and broke shop windows, own by Jewish 
shopkeepers, before the last world war two.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/16/2012 10:50:00 PM
Jan,,, wow.... this is no where close to the movies wrong turn... makes me wonder..xox~pd
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 8/17/2012 3:31:00 AM
thank you destroyer
Date: 8/16/2012 8:18:00 AM
Wishing this is "the way it used to be" Kathy
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 8/16/2012 11:30:00 AM
thank you..."the way it used to be2 I know that song
Date: 8/16/2012 4:08:00 AM
Yeah, it was a bad time... not much better now... Great poem... Terry
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 8/16/2012 4:17:00 AM
thank you Terry
Date: 8/16/2012 3:46:00 AM
jan, wow this is scary...David
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 8/16/2012 4:17:00 AM
thank you David, yes it was
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