Redemption

Twilight's blessing. 
Soft shades kiss the meadowlands 
adrift in blissful silence. 
Windows glow like welcome beacons 
hailing ships on storm-toss'd oceans 
sailing safe to harbor's rest, as villagers 
repose, so soon to sleep. 

At the edge of town the church is still. 
Strangled gravestones mark in mute remembrance 
struggles of an age gone by. 
Ivied walls and crumbling steeple, 
signs of venerable decay, where kinfolk meet 
to greet their Gods and beg forgiveness 
for their many indiscretions.

A haven for the wealthy and the ne'er-do-well alike, 
it welcomes differences of race and creed. 
All worship embraced in its sheltered precincts, 
all sinners accepted according to need.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Swanson Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 1:01 PM
Hi Keith, very lovely poem, you give wonderful images here, I can see this little town in my mind. Excellent writing! Happy Holidays to you and yours, Amy :)
Gass Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 7:20 AM
Lovely and flowing. Wonderful images. The first stanza is enchanting but it's all beautiful. Love Robin
Reynolds Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 6:54 AM
Amazing. Man, I sure do love Cathedrals - I wrote a quatrian about them, the cathedral, a few months back as I find them so inspiring and moving - so much history!!! loved loved this, Kristin
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December 15, 2008 at 6:30 AM
wonderful write. This flows so well and I can see this place and feel the mood of it all. I am reading and i feel myself transported in another time. I think is just wonderfully written.
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