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female redbird lands as lunar flower closes.... bugs drawn to nectar

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/6/2023 4:13:00 PM

a delightful Haiku, Ms. Sara. I appreciate you using 'lunar flower' for the moon flower. Those are lovely...I agree. Just a pleasant read. My best always, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/7/2023 7:00:00 AM

Why, thank you, the other Sara. Glad you enjoyed reading it. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 9/25/2023 8:14:00 PM

Beautiful haiku. Moon flower justifies its name ! Have a pleasant week ahead, dear friend.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/26/2023 10:23:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit and the nice comments about my work. I like the moonflower because of its white flower which helps summers seem cooler plus it blooms at night. Sara

Joseph May

Date: 9/20/2023 5:37:00 AM

Wonderful haiku Sara, best wishes

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/20/2023 6:07:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph. It is just a write not for a contest. Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/19/2023 6:14:00 AM

A beautiful haiku dear Sara, the imagery is so eloquent and your wordplay has been gorgeously done! Sending love- Hiya :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/19/2023 6:34:00 AM

Why, thank you, Hiya. I think the redbird was eating the bugs drawn to the lunar flower's bloom. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2023 3:30:00 AM

Lovely haiku. You are so good at these.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/19/2023 4:08:00 AM

Why, thank you, Victor. I always think I could do better. Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/19/2023 1:40:00 AM

Awesome, Sara, imagery at its best:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/19/2023 4:09:00 AM

Why, thank you, Joanna. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/18/2023 6:14:00 PM

Sara, your use of exquisite vocabulary evokes lovely imagery that effortlessly transports me into a vivid mental picture.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/19/2023 4:07:00 AM

Ahh!! Glad you could visualize the writing, Lasaad. I appreciate the high praise. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/18/2023 5:46:00 PM

You write fabulous haikus, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/19/2023 4:05:00 AM

Why, thank you, Kim. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2023 1:50:00 PM

- How delightfully drawn to nectar, Sara - Beautiful written :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/18/2023 4:43:00 PM

Why, thank you, Anne-Lise. Bugs get on the lunar flower at night so I think the redbird was looking for easy pickings for breakfast so she would not have to cook. LOL>.Your visits always are uplifting. Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/18/2023 1:46:00 PM

simply beautiful--as a Haiku should be. I enjoyed reading it thinking about the redbirds my mother enjoyed. Have a great day, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/18/2023 4:42:00 PM

Ahhh!!, Sara, so your mom likes redbirds also. They are beautiful. It was one born this season because its colors had not fully developed. Amazing how she was already on her own. Thanks for the visit and taking time to leave a comment. I appreciate you dropping by ..Sara K

Silent One

Date: 9/18/2023 12:14:00 PM

Lovely imagery due to the excellent use of words here... i can picture it in my mind.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/18/2023 4:40:00 PM

Awesome, SO, that you can picture it. Thanks for the nice visit and kind review of my work. Sara