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For the Redamancy Poetry Contest of Suzette Richards

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Redamancy

I have to ask you
why you have not kissed me yet.
Your mouth tantalizes me.

I am a shy guy,
but now I feel emboldened
to taste your sweet honeyed lips.

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2024

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December 12, 2025 at 10:47 PM

Congratulations of course, Andrea, with this very human and passionate work. It goes without saying, well done Howard

Linda Alice Fowler

March 6, 2024 at 6:34 AM

Love it Andrea. I enjoy the updated vocabulary (shy guy) ;) Congratulations! :)

March 5, 2024 at 1:08 AM

Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this delightful and delighting sedoka. God bless you.

Suzette Richards

March 4, 2024 at 12:17 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Andrea. You hit the ground running by opening the poem with the question upfront - an unusual take on the brief which ensured you a placement in this contest. Regards, Suzette

February 26, 2024 at 10:54 PM

Sounds like a sweet kiss. I'll take a couple of those, because I am a shy guy too. Hugs, Bill

February 26, 2024 at 6:08 PM

I take this as a real thing. But, your a guy?

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2024 at 10:45 PM

I am taking the role of a guy. It's just a poem!

February 26, 2024 at 7:01 AM

Oh, so beautifully romantic, Andrea. A moment of love's touch elegantly captured.

February 26, 2024 at 5:22 AM

so lovely and questionning, sentiments are so subtle, thanks poet

February 25, 2024 at 10:28 PM

Whoa!! Very passionate one. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

February 25, 2024 at 6:48 PM

Cute and sweet. Love write. Very well delivered .

Daniel Henry Rodgers

February 25, 2024 at 4:04 PM

Wow, Andrea, such a sweet haiku full of passion and emotion. - Blessings Daniel

Regina Mcintosh

February 25, 2024 at 3:02 PM

Love it. God bless you always and I hope it is a winner. Much love and wishes for the best for you always, love, Gina

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