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Redamancy

Blue Ridge between us,
I hold onto angel wings,
from Bengaluru missed you…

Darling, the sun comes
over the mountain leaping
as the entrails of fog fade…

missing yousedoka

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/25/2024 6:43:00 AM

Kim, this is very touching. The fondness expressed by your words is evident and very pleasant to experience. The sun/fog interaction is striking and part of the barrier being broken. So insightful and it creates an image in my mind that connects to thinking about the relationship with a loved one.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2024 3:25:00 PM

Thank you, Duke! I appreciate you!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/22/2024 3:34:00 PM

I enjoyed this awesome poem's imagery very much, Kim. A beautiful poem!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2024 5:24:00 PM

Thank you very much, Evelyn!

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/22/2024 3:25:00 PM

this communicate breathking passion, between loved ones, o love the intervention of Blue Ridge, fascinating, thanks poet

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2024 5:25:00 PM

Thank you, my friend Yann!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2024 1:59:00 PM

very lovely, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2024 2:20:00 PM

Thank you :) Hope all is well, sweet poet!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/22/2024 10:56:00 AM

Great use of words to attain a great image. Hugs. xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2024 12:43:00 PM

Thank you, Victor! Hugs xx

Robert Gorelick

Date: 2/22/2024 9:46:00 AM

Blue Ridge Mountain are you referring to the grand and lovely Blue Ridge. mountains, it's what I'm picturing. Beautiful sentiment! Robert

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2024 10:13:00 AM

Yes! :) Thank you, Robert!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/22/2024 6:38:00 AM

Nicely scripted my friend--your words invoke reciprocal love.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2024 10:14:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Ink Empress

Date: 2/22/2024 2:14:00 AM

Beautiful and heartfelt sedoka. Flows very well. I especially loved “ Darling, the sun comes over the mountain leaping as the entrails of fog fade…“ how touching! And descriptive! Pleasure reading your work always dear kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2024 10:16:00 AM

Thank you kindly, dear IE!