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Poetic Form; Sedoka
Inspired: 2024 February 11
Image: White Willow Tree by Amazon

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Christina Bowring

Date: 2/19/2024 1:34:00 PM

Dear Hilo, this is a truly stunning Sedoka with a stunning picture. Such an air of purity within the poem and tranquility too. I love your choice of artistic words here and the imagery created by those words. Loved it. Hope you are keeping well. Aloha ! :):)

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/19/2024 1:47:00 PM

Such pleasantries, and just before lunch. The staff was off this holi-day, so I got to get the ole noggin into gear and surprise myself. Many thanks again for your thought-filled expressions, Christina. Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/12/2024 10:30:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/beautiful White Willow Tree pictures. Have a fun day writing away......................

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2024 11:22:00 AM

I'm grateful that you've enjoyed this write, Paula, thank you. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/12/2024 6:11:00 AM

Beautiful photo and equally lovely images you convey, William. Your ending lines speaks to the peace we feel amid nature.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2024 9:02:00 AM

Greatly appreciated, Vijay, wisely appropriated words entertains the heart. Aloha, William

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/12/2024 5:36:00 AM

this is a stunning poem, dear Hilo! It's perfectly written for the contest. Just wow. Have to fave...Have a great day, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2024 7:31:00 AM

You surprise me at every posted comment with a wow moment. thank you Sara. Aloha, William

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 2/12/2024 2:49:00 AM

A good poem. Well done.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2024 4:45:00 AM

Most kind, Jeanette, appreciated. Aloha, William