thriveni c mysore Poet Free verse

Red winged black bird

Red-wing blackbirds symbolize protection, good luck, and even prosperity. They’re a reminder that something else is out there watching over us and guiding us when necessary - Quote by Vanessa K. Eccles
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Zorro of lakeshores, coasts,
waterholes amidst tall reeds
Redkissed on wings, nicely earned
proud yellow shining badges,
worries so much over his
subdued, streaky brown missus
bossing around claiming digs,
ruling the roost, many gals -
fearless keeper of his lot
he whistles, she chatters mild

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Janice Canerdy April 19, 2025 at 6:00 AM Thriveni, CONGRATS on your win with this descriptive, informative piece. Janice

Christine Watts April 14, 2025 at 7:59 PM Hi thriveni Congratulations on a well written poem on your black bird, Sounds like he rules the roost lol Nicely done Cheers Christine thriveni c mysore April 15, 2025 at 8:25 PM Thank you for your pleasant visit and kind words dear poet. yeah 'he rules the roost' a lively bird dear poet. Thank you very much.

Valsa George April 13, 2025 at 10:04 PM Beautiful ten lines on this red winged black bird. I haven't heard of this bird. So your poem has been a learning experience for me. Congratulations Thriveni on your great win. thriveni c mysore April 14, 2025 at 1:11 AM Oh he is a pretty sight, so like crow yet so very different. Thank you for your kind visit and encouraging words dear friend, thank you so much.

Sotto Poet April 13, 2025 at 8:15 PM A wonderfully woven word and a breathtaking poem Thrivini :) - Cheers on your pleasing win thriveni c mysore April 14, 2025 at 1:10 AM Thank you for this pleasant visit and kind words dear poet. means a lot to me. thank you very much.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa April 13, 2025 at 1:07 PM This is nice. Congratulations on your win. thriveni c mysore April 13, 2025 at 7:23 PM Thank you for your kind visit dear friend. I am glad you liked it. Thank you for the sweet words. thank you.

Krishnanand Guptar April 13, 2025 at 11:56 AM Congratulations, dear friend, on your high placement in this poetry contest with a succinct poem which is also quite informative at the same time. wish you a pleasant coming week. thriveni c mysore April 13, 2025 at 7:23 PM Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you find it informative, Thank you for the good wishes and sweet words. thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2025 at 10:17 AM - A well-chosen quote and a beautiful poem, Thrivini :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - thriveni c mysore April 13, 2025 at 7:22 PM I am glad you liked it dear friend, thank you so much for your kind visit and sweet words. thankyou,

Paula Goldsmith April 13, 2025 at 8:42 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Red winged black bird" write. Have a blessed day with your win....... thriveni c mysore April 13, 2025 at 7:22 PM Thank you so much for your kind visit and words dear poet. I am grateful to you for the wishes and blessings. thankyou.

I Am Anaya April 13, 2025 at 8:31 AM Congratulations on your placement, Thrivini thriveni c mysore April 13, 2025 at 7:21 PM Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. Thank you for these sweet words. cheers

Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2025 at 5:08 PM One of my favorite bird encounters thriveni c mysore April 11, 2025 at 4:55 AM Glad to know he is your fav dear friend. Thank you for your kind visit and words. thank you.