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Red: the Color of Love

Her sensual scarlet lips tempted him to taste
the sweet kisses that awaited.
There was a rosy blush on her cheeks,
drawn out by his intimate whispers.
Deep claret wine graced the crystal laden table 
evening lit by the golden light of a full moon.
A hundred carnelian candles, varied in height,
enhanced the room where seduction would ensue.
Heat from the flames not nearly as torrid 
as the smoldering look within their eyes.
Scent of long stemmed crimson roses filled the air.
As they danced, he spun her into his arms. 
Her deep carmine silk dress clung to the curves of her body. 
Guided her to the burgundy brocade couch, sat beside her
and took her face in his hands. They stared into each others eyes, 
but not a word was spoken.  Without taking his eyes from hers,
he went to his knees and offered her a red velvet box.
A single tear fell to her cheek. Nestled within the white satin
was testimony to his love, a ruby ring, encircled by diamonds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sage Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 8:21 AM
isn't that lady's gown too long for a dance, well, i won't be there to listen to complaints and groans when they both fall lol, that's a lovely write and many great words, excellent!
Scars Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 12:47 PM
Lin..."A hundred carnelian candles, varied in height, enhanced the room where seduction would ensue." Beautifully stated...#7, great job thanks for sharing..-luloo *smiles*
Lane Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Thank you my sweet friend. My pleasure to share with you.
Turner Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Somebodies feeling amorous today. I love it. Very sensuous write, Lin. Very romantic.
Lane Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:27 AM
lol No, but SO has done blue and green, so I thought I'd write about red...it's EVER so much more amorous.
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