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Red Sun

Red Sun strides into glory
Pompous owner of the sky
Melts everything he touches
Solar flare in you

Red Sun Contest
Russell Silvey
July 2, 2013

Use of Personification

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Bl Devnath

Date: 7/5/2013 12:16:00 PM

Beautiful imagination with wonderful adoration. Lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2013 12:22:00 PM

Wow! Thanks BL....going to keep my fingers crossed!

Richard D Seal

Date: 7/3/2013 2:45:00 PM

Will you please stop making me think for myself, thank you. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/7/2013 3:46:00 AM

Richard......what are you trying to imply????? Come now....spit it out! ;)

Richard D Seal
Date: 7/5/2013 3:42:00 PM

WOW look who talking lol

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2013 12:21:00 PM

Can't help it, dearie...you DO bring so much sunshine into my life! You are so full of yourself, Mr Seal. Please....humility IS a virtue! ;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/3/2013 6:07:00 AM

Russell will really like this one.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2013 12:21:00 PM

Thanks, Richard. Hope you like it as well! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2013 11:07:00 PM

LOVE this one for Russell!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2013 12:20:00 PM

LOVE....LOVE! :) Thanks, Andrea. You are a dear!

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/2/2013 10:33:00 PM

Looks like something Russell will like.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2013 12:20:00 PM

I sure hope so, Robert. It would be nice if I were able to impress him! I think he was going more for the color changes in the sky and something in praise of nature. Silly me, I HAVE to get romance in there! Thanks for the post.