Red Sun

Gods weary red sleepy eye
opening, turning darkness
back to lovely blue bird skies
watching over me

©Donna Jones
6-23-2013

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Robert Johnson

July 29, 2013 at 11:39 AM

To every day there is a reason and now I understand. The only thing I need to know is that it's by God's hand.

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2013 at 12:39 AM

a wow poem. Big congrats.

Judy Konos

July 25, 2013 at 2:39 PM

That's a WOW WOW thanks.

Skat A

July 25, 2013 at 2:29 PM

Donna.... congrats *****SKAT

Karen Anglesey

July 23, 2013 at 5:55 PM

Nice imagery with a sense of comfort. Congratulations on your win.

Bl Devnath

July 23, 2013 at 12:29 PM

Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Joseph May

July 23, 2013 at 11:08 AM

congrats on a fine win Donna

Debbie Duncan

July 11, 2013 at 12:23 AM

Oh, I like the wording here Donna ;} thank you for coming to read my Living Life ;}

Bl Devnath

June 29, 2013 at 9:30 AM

Very nice having cool in hot Sun's adoration. Lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Robert Pettit

June 27, 2013 at 5:48 PM

Pretty way to describe a morning sunrise.

Jack Jordan

June 27, 2013 at 6:42 AM

Beautiful... Good luck in the contest... Jack

David De La Croes

June 27, 2013 at 2:30 AM

I love the confident faith with shines through your poem, Donna... Go well, David

Poet. Undertaker

June 26, 2013 at 8:13 AM

Hi Donna, great write.GOD is there.

April Gabriella

June 26, 2013 at 2:23 AM

I really like this !Good luck in the contest. :)

Nette Onclaud

June 25, 2013 at 12:51 PM

engrossed by this winsome piece... splendid, donna..:) huggs

Donna Jones

June 25, 2013 at 9:48 PM

Thank you very much....you give me wings to keep trying...

Eileen Manassian

June 25, 2013 at 12:23 PM

OH, MD......Yes, He is watching over us. How beautiful this is! Missed ya! Hope all is well....Good luck in the contest!

Donna Jones

June 25, 2013 at 9:51 PM

Hi beautiful....yes things are OK....so busy is all...glad you liked it..you know this is obviously my first try at this form but its the only way to learn..right?

Adarsh Raj

June 25, 2013 at 10:12 AM

Beautiful

Donna Jones

June 25, 2013 at 9:51 PM

Thanks!

Painted Hunter

June 25, 2013 at 10:03 AM

Very...very cool, Donna. I'm a fan of these little jags. Good luck in the contest. Oh, and the rattler you asked about...it was a rare occasion in which I wasn't carrying a pistol, so I bashed his head with a stick of firewood...took some pictures...then ate him...ha...I'm such a redneck..;)

Donna Jones

June 25, 2013 at 9:52 PM

Yummy...and hatband too....and I is one too