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Red Sun

Morning sun and sky aflame Message from the Sun God Ra I hold your fate in my warmth Live lives of respect. 6/18/13 Red Sun contest

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Debra Squyres

Date: 6/22/2013 9:25:00 PM

A wonderful message where ever it's from... nicely done !!

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/22/2013 3:55:00 PM

What a nice pagan expression here! Peace & love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2013 9:55:00 PM

this is simply beautiful. I think if I had been an Indian, I'd have been of the tribe called "sun worshipers!"

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/20/2013 6:45:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Barb, the spider verse was just personification of the leaf & the similarity between mans voyage and that of natures. Good motto above maybe [live life's? ]Light & Love

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/20/2013 10:29:00 AM

The flame within will tell it's tale. A foolish life is not for sale.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/19/2013 4:12:00 PM

'Live lives of respect'...That just about covers it all, Barbara...If we all lived our lives that way this world would be a much better place...Good luck in the contest - Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/19/2013 3:42:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this contest entry this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always valued..Sara