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Red Sun




Morning sun and sky aflame
Message from the Sun God Ra
I hold your fate in my warmth
Live lives of respect.

 


6/18/13

Red Sun contest

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Debra Squyres

June 22, 2013 at 9:25 PM

A wonderful message where ever it's from... nicely done !!

Matthew Anish

June 22, 2013 at 3:55 PM

What a nice pagan expression here! Peace & love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

June 20, 2013 at 9:55 PM

this is simply beautiful. I think if I had been an Indian, I'd have been of the tribe called "sun worshipers!"

Debbie Guzzi

June 20, 2013 at 6:45 PM

Thanks for stopping by Barb, the spider verse was just personification of the leaf & the similarity between mans voyage and that of natures. Good motto above maybe [live life's? ]Light & Love

Robert Johnson

June 20, 2013 at 10:29 AM

The flame within will tell it's tale. A foolish life is not for sale.

Tim Ryerson

June 19, 2013 at 4:12 PM

'Live lives of respect'...That just about covers it all, Barbara...If we all lived our lives that way this world would be a much better place...Good luck in the contest - Tim