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Red Sky Dawning

We already can notice dawn unfolds a warm greeting of renewing hope, a liturgical invocation, not just because that's the way our Earth revolves around that Other, too hot and terror-powerful burning Sun, and not just because we feel this way inside our polypathic minds, but because of both deductive-inductive exterior-interior yang-yin bilaterally interdependent creolizing languaged reasons of Self with Other nondual co-arising Earth's double-binding humane-divine acclimation, natural-spiritual binomial balancing cooperative organic dynamic revolutionary ego/ecologically systemic EarthMind InspiringNature.

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Date: 4/10/2017 7:30:00 AM
Strong language that juxtaposes ideas into radical thought packets of mine-yours, natural-synthetic, heaven and earth. Well done.
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Gerald Dillenbeck
Date: 4/10/2017 7:41:00 AM
Thx so much, especially for your choice of "strong language". I find myself working and playing really hard together in search of effective language for LeftBrain dominant culture, and, you are right, this does feel strong and crisp, more Yangish, less resonantly resolved and multisyllabic Yinnish.