Red Sky Dawning

We already can notice
dawn unfolds a warm greeting 
of renewing hope,
a liturgical invocation,
not just because that's the way our Earth revolves
around that Other,
too hot and terror-powerful burning Sun,
and not just because we feel this way inside
our polypathic minds,
but because of both
deductive-inductive
exterior-interior
yang-yin bilaterally interdependent
creolizing languaged reasons
of Self with Other
nondual co-arising Earth's double-binding humane-divine acclimation,
natural-spiritual binomial balancing
cooperative
organic
dynamic
revolutionary ego/ecologically systemic
EarthMind InspiringNature.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/10/2017 7:30:00 AM
Strong language that juxtaposes ideas into radical thought packets of mine-yours, natural-synthetic, heaven and earth. Well done.
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Gerald Dillenbeck
Date: 4/10/2017 7:41:00 AM
Thx so much, especially for your choice of "strong language". I find myself working and playing really hard together in search of effective language for LeftBrain dominant culture, and, you are right, this does feel strong and crisp, more Yangish, less resonantly resolved and multisyllabic Yinnish.
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