Red Shoulder Hawk

red shoulder hawk flies looks for a meal in winter.... western part of town

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/26/2014 3:05:00 PM

lovely haiku, Sara - love to imagine the birds from Georgia

Funom Makama

Date: 1/24/2014 3:32:00 PM

What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/24/2014 2:12:00 PM

I hope this hawk finds his meal. Another decent write Sara.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/24/2014 2:03:00 PM

i am reminded on migratory birds during this season, sara.. tou definitely fly with thi lovely 'ku.. huggs

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/23/2014 9:33:00 PM

HEY LADY I loved this write my dad and i nursed a hawk we recused back to heatlh than set it free yeas ago, what's really funny is i just talked to someone about this tonight at work and than read your poem tonight also. lol thanks for shariing this wish me it made me remember a good memory about my dad. cheri by the way how are you feeling have not heard from you lately so am worrted about you. cheri

Jack Horne

Date: 1/23/2014 3:15:00 PM

lovely haiku, my friend - congrats on your wins too

Ken Carroll

Date: 1/23/2014 2:02:00 PM

Nice observation Sara..

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/23/2014 10:56:00 AM

This is spectacular Haiku Sara! I really enjoyed reading this very tremendous poem this morning! You have enlightened me by the splendor of this incredible piece! What a astounding poem, Great Work!!

Jerry Bolton

Date: 1/23/2014 10:18:00 AM

Hope that red hawk finds his meal. Too bad for the rabbit, or whatever he can find. Eh, life. There are those that hunt and there are those who are hunted.