Red Shoes

Red Shoes Pretty legs lonesome heart black dress in the backstreets of Chicago Pretty face ruined heart black soul I stabbed him to death in Chicago
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fowler Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 6:22 AM
Nothing like a woman scorned. Loved this succinct write. Red, darkness, death. Perfect. Keep smiling! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Damn good poetry.
Severo Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 8:43 PM
Thank you kindly dear Sir xoxo
Debole Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 5:39 PM
Aurore, Your imagery quickly pulled me in and painted a picture of true crime tragedy in poetic terms. Simply stated and powerful. - Gail
Severo Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 8:09 PM
Thank you Gail xoxo
Callus Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 11:57 AM
Those red shoes are conspicuous in the surrounding B&W background, Aurore. This dark, tragic presentation reminds me of another tragic moment...the girl in the red coat in Schindler's List. ~ Warm regards, my friend; pleased to see you posting again. // paul
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June 22, 2022 at 8:09 PM
Hi Paul, thanks so much, hope you are in good health. xoxo
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