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Red Red Heart

The heart like a bottle of fine red wine Grows only sweeter and more precious over time Through the heart flows the blood of yours and mine As does the life giving sap in the fruit of the vine The grapes take time to ripen, wine longer to make And the stronger love is, the longer the heart may take If picked too soon, grapes are bitter every one A heart broken too often, can't be undone Both take many things to really become What the one thing by themselves could not be done The contents of either are not best opened alone But better shared with a special someone If not carefully protected each can easily shatter And quickly to unknown places scatter But treated as they were intended to be Bring happiness given so easily ©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/4/2013 11:26:00 AM
Great piece Donna. This really nice!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/4/2013 4:07:00 PM
Thank you very much...blessings
Date: 2/3/2013 9:15:00 AM
Donne, I really like this one. I wish I had time to read more of your poems but I have to hurry off here now and get to church. Hope to see more of you!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2013 3:01:00 PM
Thanks or stopping to read but church is definitely more important than my silly poetry. God bless
Date: 2/3/2013 6:56:00 AM
Being a wine drinker I have enjoyed this piece... Your comments made me smile...xxx Michael
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2013 7:34:00 AM
So glad you liked it... nothing like a good glass of wine..good day
Date: 2/3/2013 4:39:00 AM
This is BRILLIANT my dear Donna! Absolutely love the analogy... one of your best! Love and hugs, Jack xox
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2013 7:35:00 AM
Well top of the mornin' and thanks!
Date: 2/2/2013 11:38:00 PM
Wonderful piece..Ido enjoy my wine and this was a really nice way to play with the subject.BG
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2013 7:36:00 AM
Thanks and am glad someone got what I was trying to do
Date: 2/2/2013 10:03:00 PM
This is a purely wondrous and glorious write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a powerful piece, one of sure love, Great Work!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2013 7:37:00 AM
Its always love from the bottom of a wine glass haha!

Book: Shattered Sighs