Red Red Heart

The heart like a bottle of fine red wine
Grows only sweeter and more precious over time
Through the heart flows the blood of yours and mine
As does the life giving sap in the fruit of the vine

The grapes take time to ripen, wine longer to make
And the stronger love is, the longer the heart may take
If picked too soon, grapes are bitter every one
A heart broken too often, can't be undone

Both take many things to really become
What the one thing by themselves could not be done
The contents of either are not best opened alone
But better shared with a special someone

If not carefully protected each can easily shatter
And quickly to unknown places scatter
But treated as they were intended to be
Bring happiness given so easily

©Donna Jones
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Aladeshawe Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 11:26 AM
Great piece Donna. This really nice!
Jones Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 4:07 PM
Thank you very much...blessings
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 9:15 AM
Donne, I really like this one. I wish I had time to read more of your poems but I have to hurry off here now and get to church. Hope to see more of you!
Jones Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 3:01 PM
Thanks or stopping to read but church is definitely more important than my silly poetry. God bless
Falotico Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 6:56 AM
Being a wine drinker I have enjoyed this piece... Your comments made me smile...xxx Michael
Jones Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 7:34 AM
So glad you liked it... nothing like a good glass of wine..good day
Ellison Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 4:39 AM
This is BRILLIANT my dear Donna! Absolutely love the analogy... one of your best! Love and hugs, Jack xox
Jones Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 7:35 AM
Well top of the mornin' and thanks!
Gorelick Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 11:38 PM
Wonderful piece..Ido enjoy my wine and this was a really nice way to play with the subject.BG
Jones Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Thanks and am glad someone got what I was trying to do
Sivey Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 10:03 PM
This is a purely wondrous and glorious write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a powerful piece, one of sure love, Great Work!!
Jones Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 7:37 AM
Its always love from the bottom of a wine glass haha!
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