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Late in the day, there was red on the sun, Shadows falling darkly, all over the world. The fragrant evening breezes wandered afar; And blooms swayed, awash in the tinted glow, Of the deep golden sun, very tinged in red. Clouds drifted away, bearing the joy of color; And trees stood still as sentries of the night. Cardinal sang a tune, And rubies flashed fire! The evening was warm, and redness chased day; And blue skies then, but memory of a morning. The fireflies were wandering, red on the rose; And radiance of moonlight, arrived quite soon. Mars was at the horizon, a scarlet sun shining. The clock was slowly ticking, beauty abounding! Such music on the wind, and rapture in the trees- The world was at the sunset, awaiting blackness!

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Date: 11/4/2020 8:39:00 AM
Love the imagery, serene and beautiful..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/4/2020 9:55:00 AM
I truly appreciate your thoughts. :)
Date: 11/4/2020 6:56:00 AM
Evelyn, Nice evening told so well in this poem's departing Sun. -Richard
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/4/2020 9:53:00 AM
I am grateful for your supportive words, Richard. :)
Date: 11/3/2020 11:01:00 PM
Must be a November Indian summer. They are always beautiful like your poem. ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/4/2020 9:51:00 AM
Warmest thanks, Victor. :)

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