Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

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July 30, 2023
Placed 1st: This or That, Vol 19 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title Chosen: Red Moon Rising

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Red Moon Rising

Red moon rising, a globe ruby, an opulent theme,
A scarlet smile, a sight tranquil, a heavenly dream,
Weaves fabric of passions deep, as desires gleam,
Notions-romantic, undulating joy on stellar stream.

Hues iridescent paint a canvas of chromatic skies
Luring gazes, inflaming fervor of enamored eyes,
Glued to vision, intimate pleas of hearts surmise,
Inscribing crimson, where motifs moonstruck rise.

Embracing red moon, heartbeats rhapsodic tiptoe,
Caressing adoration of emotive eventide aglow,
Where, breezing affection, zephyrs amatory blow,
Whispering sweet-nothings, secrets fervent bestow.

As rhythms of our heart, lyrics of our soul rhyme,
Avowing pledges revered, through the song of time,
Reciting words divine, replaying promises sublime,
Under the red moon, we laud, bliss of love in prime.

Across celestial beauty, as impulses-angelic scroll,
Hypnotizing minds, captivating essence of soul,
A red moon tantalizing, O, sensuously we extol,
Weaving fabric of passions fantasies moonlit cajole.

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Joe Maverick November 22, 2023 at 10:59 PM Red it. ' this really extolls Vijay comments to cajole.'

Hiya Sharma August 23, 2023 at 6:45 AM I'm absolutely in marvel of your pristine wordplay, rhymes, alliteration and marvelous vocabulary.. The concept of 'red moon" Is sufficient enough to enchant anyone's heart and i couldn't stop myself from reading this piece and reaching until the end.. It all flowed so beautifully, with different shades of red and graceful descriptions.. Writes like these just make my soul happy, to the core, such a poetic treat!

Ink Empress August 16, 2023 at 10:54 AM This is one of those poems that would make any reader stop and catch their breath as they continue reading again. Wow! Those slight alliterations, descriptive language rhymes and flow of your imagery makes this an impeccable write. Brilliant poem. One of the most exquisite ones iv read on moon .. and very fitting, as the new moon blesses our night skies again. I love your use of colors too! Passionate with a romantic touch Vijay Pandit August 17, 2023 at 4:25 AM So very kind of you. Much appreciate--many thanks. Welcome to Poetry Soup! You are a shining presence on my page.

Silent One August 16, 2023 at 9:19 AM You write rhymes so well.. as always your poetry is full of great verses using perfect vocabulary.. a very talented poet you are.. inspiring also... Vijay Pandit August 17, 2023 at 4:23 AM Thank you, SO. Glad to see you again. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Deb M August 16, 2023 at 4:18 AM What can l say that hasn't already been said Vijay!!….another Vijay beauty!! Just lovely my friend….Debx Vijay Pandit August 17, 2023 at 4:22 AM Thank you my friend. You are very kind as always.

Victor Buhagiar August 15, 2023 at 10:06 AM Slowly I'm trying to recapture my old friends. Takes time. Loved the alliteration and stunning imagery and vocabulary. Vijay Pandit August 17, 2023 at 4:22 AM Welcome back Victor. Glad you are writing again. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Robert Lindley August 15, 2023 at 5:15 AM My good friend, this is truly exceptional poetry from your golden pen. I did so enjoy reading this very fine poem!! Verses that sing to this old poet's heart. A gam and a new fav for me! God bless. Vijay Pandit August 17, 2023 at 4:21 AM Honored by your comments and your FAVE. Many thanks Robert. So special to read your comments.

Linda Alice Fowler August 14, 2023 at 3:40 PM Soothing and fulfilling verses Vijay. A romantic, sensuous write my friend. Belated congratulations on a wonderful win my friend. :) Vijay Pandit August 17, 2023 at 4:20 AM Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Debjani Mitra August 14, 2023 at 2:14 AM King of romance , emperor of Poems..simply captivating....thats how Poetry should be. lots to learn from your writing Vijay Pandit August 17, 2023 at 4:20 AM Glad to see you again. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos August 12, 2023 at 5:57 AM As alway a gem but this time a fav . Also your poetry is leagues beyond some of us and congratulations on your very deserved win. Hugs and blessings Jennifer Vijay Pandit August 17, 2023 at 4:19 AM Many thanks Jennifer. Always a joy when you visit.

Susan Lawrence August 9, 2023 at 6:02 PM So smooth like a silken touch . One that keeps giving in its intensity and sensuousness. Your gift for words continues to grow Vijay . I have missed your poems. Did you write as a child? Just curious . Belated congratulations on your win for this gem . Susan :) Vijay Pandit August 13, 2023 at 4:43 AM Always a delight to see you on my page. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks, Susan.

Akkina Downing August 8, 2023 at 7:20 PM Vijay, just how wonderful to come back and read you. Just a joy for me :) And, WOW! You sure are still so very romantic and making the hearts smiling here. Of course I love it! Stunning poem, my friend. And congratulations on your win! Vijay Pandit August 13, 2023 at 4:42 AM Glad to see you again, Akkina. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many thanks, my friend.

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2023 at 3:44 PM so beautiful, Vijay. Big congrats on your win. Vijay Pandit August 13, 2023 at 4:41 AM Many thanks, Andrea--much appreciate.

Mike Gentile August 8, 2023 at 4:22 AM Live velvet, your words sooth the mood in their capacity to extoll the sweet and sensual strings of love! Vijay you are truly a master at his!! Happy Tuesday!! Vijay Pandit August 13, 2023 at 4:41 AM Thank you Mike. Always appreciate your visit and comments.

Heidi Sands August 7, 2023 at 11:43 AM Stunning! I love Red Moon Rising. Your excellent vocabulary brings me to another place. I very much enjoyed this, my friend! Excellent :) Vijay Pandit August 7, 2023 at 3:59 PM Thank you friend. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate your supportive comments.

Timothy Ray August 6, 2023 at 10:23 PM wow....wow....wow.....duly note fellow wordsmiths....i am left wordless Vijay Pandit August 7, 2023 at 3:58 PM So very kind of you Tim. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley August 6, 2023 at 9:27 PM Another beautiful gem Vijay, you paint such incredible images with your pen. This is another masterpiece. Vijay Pandit August 7, 2023 at 3:58 PM Thank you, BJ--I appreciate your kind feedback.

Deb M August 6, 2023 at 3:48 PM Vibrant imagery and poetically beautiful Vijay…..you never fail to produce such amazing poetry! Always Debx Vijay Pandit August 7, 2023 at 3:57 PM Glad to see you again my friend. Much appreciate, Deb--many thanks.

Edward Ibeh August 6, 2023 at 9:11 AM Excellent penning as usual, Vijay:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest! Vijay Pandit August 7, 2023 at 3:57 PM Much appreciate, my friend. Many thanks for your kind remarks and special thanks for sponsoring contests.

Christuraj Alex August 6, 2023 at 8:12 AM "As rhythms of our heart, lyrics of our soul rhyme, Avowing pledges revered, through the song of time" - Indeed, highly poetic. Congratulations! Vijay Pandit August 7, 2023 at 3:56 PM Many thanks Christuraj--much appreciate.

Bill Baker August 5, 2023 at 4:28 PM Congrats on your contest win, my friend. A FAV for my list. Your imagery is always inspiring, and the rhythm of your poetry a joy to read, Vijay. Have a pleasant week! Bill Vijay Pandit August 7, 2023 at 3:56 PM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Bill. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Joseph P. DiMino August 5, 2023 at 6:09 AM "As rhythms of our heart, lyrics of our soul rhyme, Avowing pledges revered, through the song of time," -- enchanting imagery and romantic, beautifully poetic use of the sound and cadence of rapturous language -- Love it! Vijay Pandit August 6, 2023 at 8:55 AM You are so very kind my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Joe. Many thanks.

Joseph May August 5, 2023 at 12:15 AM Red moon rising with a scarlet smile, Beautiful write Vijay Vijay Pandit August 6, 2023 at 8:54 AM Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose August 4, 2023 at 3:14 PM Always a winner in my book, now you got the grades to prove it. Congrats on your 1st place win, Vijay :) Vijay Pandit August 6, 2023 at 8:54 AM Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate.

Michael Tor August 2, 2023 at 12:07 PM Your unique words captivate the visual adoration for the moon and the passions and emotions it invokes on the viewer. Your words are iconic in describing Vijay. You are the Word Wizard and with that said your words put us in a trance of the Moons Power. Thanks for the experience and much luck in the contest... Another favorite my friend... Vijay Pandit August 3, 2023 at 6:05 AM So very kind of you my friend. I am always delighted by your presence on my page-and your thoughtful comments. Many thanks, as always, Michael. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

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