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Red Mist

Red mist collects in the corners of my mind Clouding many images that should be clear Confusion greets my thoughts I find And my eyes begin to tear. Revenge burns within me Rage beats like I have two hearts Contentment and peace I cannot see Wait until the healing starts. Come the day when all is forgiven When, I cannot say Weakness and pain now are given At the end of each working day. To this I am condemned most unfairly No act of mine did warrant this charge And now fallen I can raise my head barely For my burden is overly large. Please come the day when it’s finally over And my waking won’t be with regret Then I will walk in fields of sweet clover And those wrongs I will gladly forget.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/23/2009 8:21:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Richard. I am wishing you he best in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2009 3:07:00 PM
I like the feeling of peace in the last two lines. Sweet peace. Poem drew me in very inviting. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/22/2009 7:47:00 AM
awww a great write, its humble we all make mistakes but the good thing is we can put our past behind us and move forward, it will be over one day somethings take time but ti will come, welcome to poetry soup may you find many friends in writing on the site, God bless you
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