Red Leaves

Red leaves are a bright contrast

   to all the glorious green.

Like a girl with a new frock

   saying "Look at me!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 2:38 AM
Love the thoughts behind this Francine, have a fun filled weekend....:)
Sweetheart Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 6:10 AM
Know I read this one before Francine but wanted to say thankxx for the example poem.. I really know this helps the poets who enter all contests.. have a happy weekend ...
La France Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 11:50 PM
A beatiful example of Dodoitsu~~
Johnson Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 3:25 PM
Yes Francine you are the Queen.. sweet mother of the flock.. all good here .. the soupers dear.. not a one could i knock... xo Don
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 5:42 AM
I enjoy reading your amazing poetry this morning Francine. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:11 PM
beautiful images with deep explicit meaning, Francine
Dufresne Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:51 PM
Yes, Francine. Up, bubbly and entertaining. Great simile.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 3:52 PM
Spring beauty is intense and amazing to our view Francine and your lovely lines envelop us in this beauty ... a wonderful Dodoitsu .. refreshing piece..
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