Red Hot Loving

I saw her first in the pub
A creature so divine
I knew then straight away
Somehow she was going to be mine

I waltzed up so suave and cool
Said “good day luv,” and I was blushing
She looked at me like I was a bug
Just waiting for the crushing

But then she spied
What was in my hand
A whole roll of fifties
Suddenly her smile did expand

Took my hand said, “come with me,”
To her place we'll be going
Walked in the door
My passion was rapidly growing

Holy hells bells, once we got in
The clothes off me she was tearing
Finally my luck had changed
At one hot body I was staring

Her fingers she snapped, “money thanks”
Handed it over quick, I’ll be admitting
Didn’t care, just wanted her
Today some lovin' I'll be getting

So into bed, man she's hot
Oh man now I'm drooling
Huge breasts with puffy nipples
I’m ready for some serious fooling

My hand slid down
To silky soft thighs
And found the unexpected
My objective I had to revise

I'm out of bed
And dressed so quick
Running out at full speed
The chick had a dick

And what made it worse
She had one bigger than I did

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/11/2014 4:38:00 AM
OH MY!!!! That put out the fire REAL QUICK! ;) Oh dear....Welcome to the SOUP!
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Stephen Curtis
Date: 3/14/2014 3:57:00 AM
Thank you ... that would put the fire out mighty quick
Date: 3/11/2014 4:21:00 AM
lol oh Steve I love this pen superb hugs
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Stephen Curtis
Date: 3/14/2014 3:56:00 AM
Thank you my friend
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