Jean Murray Poet Rhyme

Red Hot

Under a hot Parisian sky,
rain falls from on high.
We stroll on cobbled streets,
high heels clicking on my feet.

Suddenly he pulls me close,
tells me I'm loved the most.
Underneath my red umbrella,
reminds me why he's my fella.

As if no one can see,
he kisses me and I he.
His arms around my waist,
as I tenderly caress his face.

It's time my love he mumbles,
as in his pocket he fumbles.
The tiny box reveals the stone.
Engaged on our return home.

03/11/2018

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Darlene De Beaulieu May 4, 2019 at 5:18 PM Hello Jean, this is such a romantic poem. I have enjoyed. Have a nice evening my friend. Jean Murray May 4, 2019 at 5:58 PM Hi Darlene. Nice to see you.

Just James January 13, 2019 at 11:55 PM Sweet loved it my friend Jean Murray January 14, 2019 at 3:15 AM Thank you Just. Just James January 13, 2019 at 11:56 PM And congratulations !!!

Jan Allison November 17, 2018 at 1:10 PM Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Jean Murray November 17, 2018 at 1:12 PM Good evening Jan and thank you. I still can't get over how similar our poems were.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2018 at 11:52 AM - A great win on this sweet poem, Jean :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jean Murray November 14, 2018 at 12:35 PM I hug you back Sunshine. Thank you.

Mark Elam November 14, 2018 at 3:59 AM Beautiful and loved the last stanza especially. Congrats! Jean Murray November 14, 2018 at 6:06 AM Thank you Mark. I am not usually so romantic, unfortunately.

Eve Roper November 13, 2018 at 11:15 PM Thank you for entering my contest, Jean Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve Jean Murray November 14, 2018 at 6:06 AM Good afternoon from Ireland Eve and thank you.

Jan Allison November 4, 2018 at 4:29 PM Aww we chose a similar romantic theme jean! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Jean Murray November 4, 2018 at 5:25 PM Thank you Jan and good luck to you to!!

Susan Ashley November 3, 2018 at 8:34 PM Your tender verses flow beautifully with love and romance, Jean. Sentimental and superb! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Jean Murray November 4, 2018 at 1:03 AM Good morning Susan and thank you.

Vijay Pandit November 3, 2018 at 5:50 PM How sweet are these sentiments! Wonderfully depicted verses of love.. very apt for the competition. Well done, Jean. Jean Murray November 3, 2018 at 5:59 PM Hello again Vijay. I like Eve so much I could not but participate in her contest. Thank you as always for your lovely comments.