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Under a hot Parisian sky,
rain falls from on high.
We stroll on cobbled streets,
high heels clicking on my feet.

Suddenly he pulls me close,
tells me I'm loved the most.
Underneath my red umbrella,
reminds me why he's my fella.

As if no one can see,
he kisses me and I he.
His arms around my waist,
as I tenderly caress his face.

It's time my love he mumbles,
as in his pocket he fumbles.
The tiny box reveals the stone.
Engaged on our return home.

03/11/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/4/2019 5:18:00 PM
Hello Jean, this is such a romantic poem. I have enjoyed. Have a nice evening my friend.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 5/4/2019 5:58:00 PM
Hi Darlene. Nice to see you.
Date: 1/13/2019 11:55:00 PM
Sweet loved it my friend
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 1/14/2019 3:15:00 AM
Thank you Just.
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Date: 1/13/2019 11:56:00 PM
And congratulations !!!
Date: 11/17/2018 1:10:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 11/17/2018 1:12:00 PM
Good evening Jan and thank you. I still can't get over how similar our poems were.
Date: 11/14/2018 11:52:00 AM
- A great win on this sweet poem, Jean :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 11/14/2018 12:35:00 PM
I hug you back Sunshine. Thank you.
Date: 11/14/2018 3:59:00 AM
Beautiful and loved the last stanza especially. Congrats!
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 11/14/2018 6:06:00 AM
Thank you Mark. I am not usually so romantic, unfortunately.
Date: 11/13/2018 11:15:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Jean Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 11/14/2018 6:06:00 AM
Good afternoon from Ireland Eve and thank you.
Date: 11/4/2018 4:29:00 PM
Aww we chose a similar romantic theme jean! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 11/4/2018 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Jan and good luck to you to!!
Date: 11/3/2018 8:34:00 PM
Your tender verses flow beautifully with love and romance, Jean. Sentimental and superb! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 11/4/2018 1:03:00 AM
Good morning Susan and thank you.
Date: 11/3/2018 5:50:00 PM
How sweet are these sentiments! Wonderfully depicted verses of love.. very apt for the competition. Well done, Jean.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 11/3/2018 5:59:00 PM
Hello again Vijay. I like Eve so much I could not but participate in her contest. Thank you as always for your lovely comments.