Red Faced Moon

Red Faced Moon


What have we done to make the moon blush?
Thrown accolades and love poems,
blamed her for the awakening of the vampires,
the werewolf’s bad hair day.

Perhaps Mars has whispered something,
a sensuous and tempting invite,
a clandestine rendezvous behind Earth’s shadow
to watch the sun rise.

Maybe, just this once,
she stayed too long in the sun,
forgot her sunblock,
had one too many cerveza.


John G. Lawless
4/14/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/10/2014 1:45:00 PM
I remember this one, John, and so glad to see it in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 5/7/2014 9:54:00 AM
hi John congrats on win hugs
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John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2014 5:55:00 PM
Shadow, thanks for the judo. Always good to hear from you.
Date: 5/7/2014 8:05:00 AM
You've assembled a flawless write here, John. Such wonderful thoughts that totally absorbed me. Congratulations.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2014 5:55:00 PM
Thanks Mark
Date: 5/7/2014 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, John
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Date: 5/7/2014 5:16:00 AM
Awesome John ! this one is perfect for the theme i find ,,, in my view deserved much higher than it did ! congrats on a great win !
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John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2014 5:53:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment.
Date: 5/6/2014 7:42:00 PM
Such a cute sense of humor......I loved this! Great piece for the contest....congratulations John !
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John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2014 5:50:00 PM
Thanks Carrie. A little whimsy now and then is a good thing.
Date: 5/6/2014 7:39:00 PM
A really cute summation. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2014 5:50:00 PM
Hey, a girl's gotta have some fun.
Date: 4/16/2014 1:13:00 PM
Hi John, you gave me quite a laugh in this poem. Please don't awaken the vampires; the werewolf doesn't mind "bad hair days." LOL La Lune de Rouge is brilliantly painted in your witty and enchanting write. I had to read it to a friend. Too good not to share! Best wishes for a joyful Easter (if you hit the beach, take the sunblock:) Love, Carolyn
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John Lawless
Date: 4/16/2014 5:54:00 PM
Carolyn, thank you for the comment and for reading. I had some fun with this, glad you enjoyed it and shared it with a friend.
Date: 4/15/2014 8:15:00 AM
I like this so much especially the second stanza. Well done you
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John Lawless
Date: 4/16/2014 5:59:00 PM
Louise, thanks for stopping by. I alway wondered about Mars, the god of war and our crazy lunar love goddess meeting for a glass of red wine.
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