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Tania Kitchin's Bawdy Limerick Contest 7/29/23 A Collaboration with Belle Bellvue

Red Dog an Aussie of Gypsie proclivities Pawed rides through the Outback without civilities When he wished to depart He let rip a grand fart Then jumped from the car with much facility by Robert Gorelick Red dog the regular hitchhiker Once leapt up behind a bike rider The driver rode fast Until he got gassed And Red dog flew off in a hyper by Belle Bellevue

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Michael Tor

Date: 8/9/2023 1:10:00 PM

Enjoyed reading Robert and Belle thanks for the laugh...

Robert Gorelick
Date: 8/17/2023 6:17:00 PM

Will relay your thoughtful words to Belle. Thank you for reading, and glad you enjoyed, Michael. Robert

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/30/2023 11:21:00 AM

Love it so funny. Bawdy limericks that work so well together! I'd like to know more about the Red Dog, interesting. Bol Robert and Belle!

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/30/2023 6:08:00 PM

You can learn more in my quatrain tribute! Thank you, Anaya

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/30/2023 3:19:00 AM

Red dog the regular hitchhiker - Once leapt up behind a bike rider - The driver rode fast - Until he got gassed - And Red dog flew off in a hyper…… Belle

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/30/2023 6:08:00 PM

Another wonderful addition, Belle. Thank you for sharing your sequels, always welcome! Robert

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/29/2023 8:16:00 PM

I guess Red Dog left his hosts something to remember him by there, eh?! lol!

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/30/2023 6:06:00 PM

Manners no worse than many guys around. Thanks.

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/29/2023 7:57:00 PM

I didn't know they could "do" that, thanks for sharing yann

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/30/2023 6:03:00 PM

That's only the beginning! Thank you, Yann!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/29/2023 5:53:00 PM

I'd give him a lift any day, he's gorgeous, My car is equipped with nose pegs to guard against smelly hitchhikers. He does have a great way of slowing the vehicle so he can alight. Kelpie's are so smart. Loved your limerick Robert. BOL in the contest -should do well.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/30/2023 6:02:00 PM

Lol. Aussies like you that made his brief life in the Palabra worthwhile. Thank you, Robert