Red Cheeks. ( Both Sets.)

After tossing back too many shots,
My tummy got tied up in knots.
But the outhouse fell down,
now a king with no crown,
I cover up where I must: "Thank You Scotts'!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/26/2010 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Gerard in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:27:00 AM
Congrats Gerard on your big win in John's contest with this original and unique ..creative write.. enjoy another big win.. with luv my friend.. and thankxxx for your always magnanimous compliments to my work.. and me...
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:51:00 PM
this is one of the cleverest, my friend. Congratulations! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:20:00 PM
Congratulations Gerard on you contribution to a very fun contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:18:00 PM
Very funny and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/22/2010 3:31:00 PM
OH so funny Gerard.. a sure winner ... good luck my dear friend.. and thankxxx for your wonderful and fantastic comments on my Limerick.. its all natural passion ..comes from my one hundred per cent Italian blood and background.. Italy is a passionate country and although I was born in America.. the bloodline trickles down and infiltrates the veins...WoW... sounds like another write.. with luv.. appreciate..
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Date: 7/22/2010 10:48:00 AM
Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Gerard. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:49:00 PM
Hehe, funny write Gerard, tc Wilma
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