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~ADHD~ Beautiful Coffee spree Close your eyes and fell high like a tree Nothing beats the sugar in my energy I can't live my life caffeine free Somebody stop me!!!!! :)

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Robert Nehls

Date: 6/21/2014 12:41:00 PM

Ah, the drink of champions. Hope this comment catches up with you. Very well done, my friend.... Robert.

Len Gasun

Date: 2/28/2014 8:58:00 AM

Hi, my dearest sis! I'm stopping by once more to read again another poem of yours. And, I can remember this lovely writes of yours so well. So love it and enjoyed so much again. How I wish, I've red bull or coffee at my side 'cuz of my slow internet speed now. I've been here for 2 hrs but I've not done much. So, i'm coming back hopefully tom. Hope to hear from you soonloving sis & BFF of mine. Good night fr. my side of the world! Biggest hugs w/ kisses! lovem4evrLeonora

Roger Horsch

Date: 12/2/2013 8:01:00 AM

Coffee tastes so much better than Red Bull. Of course, after I put my sugar and cream in it. You made me laugh with this one. loved it.....Roger

Len Gasun

Date: 9/5/2012 11:11:00 AM

hmmnnn!!! I am not drinking coffee but I think i like it now, lol. This is a great Haiku of my Great Poet!!! I want to be the first to greet advance Merry Christmas because we're now in -er months! love and hugs, leonora

Ismael Nieves

Date: 8/16/2012 11:26:00 AM

can't be stop huh! keep coffeeing.nice expression.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/30/2012 6:09:00 AM

lol.."somebody stop me"..love this Haiku..I noticed that it was posted on X-mas..smiles

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/31/2012 6:52:00 AM

I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry this morning. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment P.D. Love, Carol"

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/13/2012 1:06:00 PM

And even relief in her pains and restlessness. Keep doing this as many times as you can for 2-3 minutes to give her energy after taking it from God (Jesus). This is called Rekhi the science introduced by Gautama Buddha. Your mother would get lot of relief and she may recover also. I would pray for her health recovery my friend. Please take care of her and keep yourself strong. Love and best wishes..Ravindra

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/13/2012 1:05:00 PM

Good Day PD. I am worried about your mother my friend. When you sit near her please try to give her courage & strength by your words. Also gently give a loving touch on her forehead. If she is in pains just put one of your bowl shaped palm on her forehead, while keeping the other (Right one) open towards sky to obtain Gods energy by Right hand & to pass on that energy through your slightly folded palm of left hand. In this way the mind of your mother would get lot of peace & comfort. To continue

Ann Roske

Date: 3/6/2012 10:13:00 AM

can't start my day without! nothing like a good brew =)

Judy Ball

Date: 1/17/2012 11:19:00 AM

Yes indeed a cup of coffee, a piece of toast and thou beside me on a Sunday morning. Good write here PD. God \Bless, JB PS Entered your contest with the receipes. JB :)

Jim Pemberton

Date: 1/16/2012 7:03:00 AM

Wishing God's best for you! Take care and thanks for the blessing you are to your fellow soupers! Take care! JP

Sheol Moribund

Date: 1/14/2012 1:46:00 PM

Hi P.D. Very insteresting poem. Coffee has become a comfort and a crutch. Have a great day.

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 1/14/2012 1:39:00 AM

Congrats on your win, PD. You ARE unstoppable

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2012 9:46:00 PM

STill love this! and thanks for the contest win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/6/2012 10:16:00 PM

OH PD MY BFF.. I AM SAD FOR U WITH THIS DRAMA TOO.. HOPE ALL GETS RESOLVED.. START THE NEW YEAR POSITIVE ..NOT ALL THIS MESS .. FAMILY IS SO PRECIOUS AND IMPORTANT.. ROYAL IS YOUNG.. KEEP HER IN PRAYER.. THANKXX FOR UPLIFTING WORDS LUV.. RON HAS BEEN AN ACE NUMBER ONE GUY.. HE EVEN BOUGHT ME A NEW RING FOR MY PINKY TODAY TO CHASE MY BLUES AWAY..DON'T KNOW HOW I COULD DO THIS WITHOUT HIM AND GREAT FRIENDS LIKE U... LUV.. ALWAYS..BFF

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/3/2012 4:01:00 PM

Do you own a restaurant? Or are you a waitress? I like the line"taste the sunrise"a lot. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/2/2012 9:20:00 AM

What a great way to greet the morning; first the smell then the sip ahhhhh!

Don Johnson

Date: 1/1/2012 7:45:00 PM

coffee breaking through the mist, brings me online does insist, sometimes....bliss

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 12/31/2011 8:08:00 AM

"Somebody stop me!!!!"; is that a Jim Carey reference? If so, is it Cable Guy or Fire Marshal Bill? I love it!

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/29/2011 4:12:00 AM

I think i should try one..! maybe i'll call in if i'm ever in town P D...)

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/28/2011 9:24:00 PM

I can only imbibe decaffeinated these days. I must get a pseudo-jolt from it because it tastes about the same as the one with caffeine. Good writing here.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2011 7:00:00 PM

re reading this one. It's so cool, Irma. and I am sure I entered my friend poem. I 'll try to remember to recheck!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/28/2011 6:57:00 PM

mmmmmmmmmmm just love that first pot in the morning.. taste the sunrise..cool. I understand that; nice one PD. Merry Christmas holydays and happy new year to you also PD!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/28/2011 10:00:00 AM

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU!! oxox love Anne-Lise