Notes About The Poem

Red Balloon

At any rate, a boy was holding a red balloon
Filled with helium, attached to a red ribbon.
Swirling and whirling without constraints
Having fun together they became fast friends,

Teasing the boy, balloon went way up high
Pulling away altogether seeking new heights,
Showing-off prowess, swaying random flight
Looking down to ensure, lad was all smiles,

Higher and higher the red dot danced
Getting swept away by a wicked day-storm.
And the little friend cried for he lost his toy
As no longer could he see it in distant sky,

But it swung back oscillating in a windy dive
When jumping with joy, the boy waved high-five.
One nasty commotion, one final good bye
As balloon burst to pieces in front of his eyes.

Happily, the lad received an identical red balloon
But unlike his friend, it refused to fly or bounce.
That's when the child noticed first time in his life
Difference between a friend and one who is not.

January 22, 2018
Poem of the day on 1/24/2018
HM: Brian's Choice 6 Contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 8:30 AM
You established a great truth through the concluding lines of the poem. There is of course a sea of difference between a friend and a stranger. Enjoyed the child's innocent mirth in flying the balloon !
Raven Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 1:15 PM
Hi Vijay, Love the content of this wonderful write. True friendships can be few, but they must be held onto. I love the message. We can let friendships go but the next might not be real. Love the content, love the message, a wonderful write. Have a wonderful weekend. your friend always....Mike.
Callus Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Your poem and a red balloon combine to pass a message on to us, Vijay. True friendship is not easy to come by. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Thank you Paul..appreciate your comments.
Neumann Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 1:45 AM
Very interesting take. An unusual theme and thus the better for it. Friends sometimes have to fly and some others will remain and lack the beauty...I like your poem.
Pandit Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 3:03 PM
Thank you Kai.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Dropping by with a big congrats on POTD. An excellent choice.
Pandit Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 2:22 PM
Thank you Richard.
Ashley Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 4:47 AM
Returning with well deserved congratulations Vijay on your POTD honors for your lovely poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Pandit Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:20 AM
Thank you Susan..always happy to read your comments.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:32 AM
Great metaphor in this celebrated piece Vijay. Congratulations on having it honored as POTD! : )
Pandit Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:19 AM
Thank you Connie..appreciate your comments.
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 11:34 PM
This one is very imaginative, Vijay. I like where you took that friend Balloon!! Also I say POTD. Big congrats for that.
Pandit Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Happy to read your comments, Andrea...many thanks.
Fleming Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:33 PM
Nicely penned, Vijay. An interesting write; and you are quite correct: "acquaintances I have many...friends I have few". My very best regards. :) john P.s Congratulations on POTD!
Pandit Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:17 AM
Thank you john..enjoyed reading your comments.
Warrior Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Congrats on POTD my dear friend...your writing is beautiful...stay in the light...^WW^
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Appreciate your kind words..many thanks WW.
Roper Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Back to congratulate you on POTD.. Hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Thank you Eve.
Downing  Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 2:44 PM
An interesting write Vijay! Congratulations on POTD and good luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles :)
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Thank you Akkina.
Pett Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on POTD with your well written poem Vijay, enjoyed. :))
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Thank you Roy.
Horsman Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Interesting subject, Vijay, very well written.
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Thank you harry.
Wanter Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Very unusual and attention-getting! Loved it. Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Thank you for your kind words, SW!
Smith Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations Vijay on POTD honors...
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 9:57 AM
What a wonderful twist at the end, love this telling, congratulations on potd! Delightful ink my friend :) xomo!
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:47 PM
Appreciate your kind words..thank you Maureen.
Y. Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Hi Vijay, I enjoyed your well written write. It had a good moral lesson on friendship. Your imagination soared just like that red balloon. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:47 PM
Thank you Alexis..happy to read your comments.
Gondolf Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Very well written, Vijay, this causes one to think. Congrats on POTD. John
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:46 PM
Thank you John.
Swartz Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on POTD Vijay! This is a great poem with a terrific ending.
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:45 PM
Thank you James.
Williams Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:39 AM
Back to say Congratulations Vijay, great choice for POTD
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:45 PM
Thank you Maria.
One Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Great choice for POTD..
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 5:47 AM
- A lovely poem, Vijay :) - Congratulations so much with p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Cresswell Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 4:11 PM
I understand from the poem that the things we post over in life are transient because we love then we set them free..
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:42 PM
A welcome interpretation, Patricia. I thought about couple more: some places of height turn out to be hostile, and friendships are one of a kind. Thanks you for your lovely thoughts.
Onclaud Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 11:55 AM
ohh, i am charmed by your lithesome work and the surprising end...spill ink, vijay..huggs
Pandit Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Appreciate your lovely comments, nette..many thanks.
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