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At any rate, a boy was holding a red balloon Filled with helium, attached to a red ribbon. Swirling and whirling without constraints Having fun together they became fast friends, Teasing the boy, balloon went way up high Pulling away altogether seeking new heights, Showing-off prowess, swaying random flight Looking down to ensure, lad was all smiles, Higher and higher the red dot danced Getting swept away by a wicked day-storm. And the little friend cried for he lost his toy As no longer could he see it in distant sky, But it swung back oscillating in a windy dive When jumping with joy, the boy waved high-five. One nasty commotion, one final good bye As balloon burst to pieces in front of his eyes. Happily, the lad received an identical red balloon But unlike his friend, it refused to fly or bounce. That's when the child noticed first time in his life Difference between a friend and one who is not. January 22, 2018 Poem of the day on 1/24/2018 HM: Brian's Choice 6 Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/4/2023 8:30:00 AM
You established a great truth through the concluding lines of the poem. There is of course a sea of difference between a friend and a stranger. Enjoyed the child's innocent mirth in flying the balloon !
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Date: 1/12/2019 1:15:00 PM
Hi Vijay, Love the content of this wonderful write. True friendships can be few, but they must be held onto. I love the message. We can let friendships go but the next might not be real. Love the content, love the message, a wonderful write. Have a wonderful weekend. your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/1/2018 3:43:00 PM
Your poem and a red balloon combine to pass a message on to us, Vijay. True friendship is not easy to come by. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/1/2018 4:13:00 PM
Thank you Paul..appreciate your comments.
Date: 2/6/2018 1:45:00 AM
Very interesting take. An unusual theme and thus the better for it. Friends sometimes have to fly and some others will remain and lack the beauty...I like your poem.
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Date: 2/6/2018 3:03:00 PM
Thank you Kai.
Date: 1/27/2018 9:21:00 AM
Dropping by with a big congrats on POTD. An excellent choice.
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Date: 1/29/2018 2:22:00 PM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 1/25/2018 4:47:00 AM
Returning with well deserved congratulations Vijay on your POTD honors for your lovely poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/25/2018 6:20:00 AM
Thank you Susan..always happy to read your comments.
Date: 1/25/2018 1:32:00 AM
Great metaphor in this celebrated piece Vijay. Congratulations on having it honored as POTD! : )
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Date: 1/25/2018 6:19:00 AM
Thank you Connie..appreciate your comments.
Date: 1/24/2018 11:34:00 PM
This one is very imaginative, Vijay. I like where you took that friend Balloon!! Also I say POTD. Big congrats for that.
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Date: 1/25/2018 6:18:00 AM
Happy to read your comments, Andrea...many thanks.
Date: 1/24/2018 6:33:00 PM
Nicely penned, Vijay. An interesting write; and you are quite correct: "acquaintances I have many...friends I have few". My very best regards. :) john P.s Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/25/2018 6:17:00 AM
Thank you john..enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 1/24/2018 3:44:00 PM
Congrats on POTD my dear friend...your writing is beautiful...stay in the light...^WW^
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Date: 1/24/2018 4:59:00 PM
Appreciate your kind words..many thanks WW.
Date: 1/24/2018 3:13:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on POTD.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/24/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 1/24/2018 2:44:00 PM
An interesting write Vijay! Congratulations on POTD and good luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 1/24/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Akkina.
Date: 1/24/2018 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD with your well written poem Vijay, enjoyed. :))
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Date: 1/24/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Roy.
Date: 1/24/2018 10:58:00 AM
Interesting subject, Vijay, very well written.
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:49:00 PM
Thank you harry.
Date: 1/24/2018 10:39:00 AM
Very unusual and attention-getting! Loved it. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:48:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, SW!
Date: 1/24/2018 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay on POTD honors...
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:48:00 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Date: 1/24/2018 9:57:00 AM
What a wonderful twist at the end, love this telling, congratulations on potd! Delightful ink my friend :) xomo!
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:47:00 PM
Appreciate your kind words..thank you Maureen.
Date: 1/24/2018 8:46:00 AM
Hi Vijay, I enjoyed your well written write. It had a good moral lesson on friendship. Your imagination soared just like that red balloon. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Alexis..happy to read your comments.
Date: 1/24/2018 7:00:00 AM
Very well written, Vijay, this causes one to think. Congrats on POTD. John
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:46:00 PM
Thank you John.
Date: 1/24/2018 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Vijay! This is a great poem with a terrific ending.
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:45:00 PM
Thank you James.
Date: 1/24/2018 6:39:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations Vijay, great choice for POTD
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Maria.
Date: 1/24/2018 6:28:00 AM
Great choice for POTD..
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 1/24/2018 5:47:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Vijay :) - Congratulations so much with p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 1/23/2018 4:11:00 PM
I understand from the poem that the things we post over in life are transient because we love then we set them free..
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:42:00 PM
A welcome interpretation, Patricia. I thought about couple more: some places of height turn out to be hostile, and friendships are one of a kind. Thanks you for your lovely thoughts.
Date: 1/23/2018 11:55:00 AM
ohh, i am charmed by your lithesome work and the surprising end...spill ink, vijay..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/23/2018 12:04:00 PM
Appreciate your lovely comments, nette..many thanks.
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