Red Apple In the Snow

When the cool snow falls, a white mink coat
wrapped around my toes and shins,
beautiful breeze of ecstatic energy,

I will let this Summer fall
as if it were a lovely gown
folded and boxed.
(after all there are some sweet memories)

A plump, perfectly formed red apple
shimmers in the snow
with one bite —

I’d not gorge on it,
lest I’d die.

(yet there were some sweet memories - don’t forget)

The snow couldn’t keep me inside.
It’s where my dreams abide.
An owl blends into its habitat,
yet it is day,
I don’t give a hoot

I must shovel
and ball up
and throw
and laugh
and twirl

(basically act like a little girl)

and tickle my love’s back
with white crystal
diamonds, that make him jump
and run
after some fun.

(I must believe Winter
will deliver)

I pull my knees to my chest
and shiver…

7/13/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 3:01 AM
To me this part is ever so brilliant Kim. "An owl blends into its habitat, yet it is day, I don’t give a hoot" Hoot. Hoot.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 4:54 AM
So glad you like that part! Hoot! Hoot!
Achilles Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 6:29 AM
Made me feel all squidgy inside- what lovely words X
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 4:32 PM
All squidgy... :):)
Warrior Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 4:41 AM
Cool write Kimmy...great contrast...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 5:35 AM
Thank you, WW!
Horsman Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 1:36 AM
Interesting theme, Kim..Love it.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 5:35 AM
Thank you, Harry!
Proxenos Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 12:26 PM
You sound like a little girl in this poem my friend. A n awesome write, I love snow and can count on my one hand only how many times snow has fallen in and around Johannesburg. A fave. Blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 5:35 AM
Thank you, Jennifer,
Mcgee Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 9:53 AM
This gave me a chuckle...loved the stanza of summer being boxed up...and the fun you were having in the snow. NIce!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 5:34 AM
Thank you, Jeanne!
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