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different shades of red
lure me to pick burgundy....
spring's ripe raspberries

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Bill Baker

Date: 5/31/2022 9:31:00 AM

A special treat, fresh of the bush. :-)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/30/2022 3:05:00 PM

Yum, there's nothing quite like fresh strawberries except for maybe fresh blueberries. Wonderfully penned.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/25/2022 11:00:00 AM

Hi Sara, This is a splendid haiku. Your write and photo work well together. I love raspberries. Good job. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/25/2022 1:44:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis. Raspberries are a good berry to add to a few dishes. Their flavor has a distinctive lure. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/24/2022 1:54:00 AM

Lovely fruit. Alas they are getting ripe with this summer heat.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/24/2022 12:18:00 PM

Victor, Yes, there are some ripe raspberries here in the south plus strawberries and peaches. Your visit is a reminder how hot it has been this spring. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/22/2022 8:16:00 PM

This takes me back to my youth, Sara, love it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/23/2022 3:53:00 AM

Harry, It is good to think back sometimes. Glad you loved it. Sara

Komal Walimbe

Date: 5/22/2022 3:34:00 AM

I have never eaten raspberries directly from a plant thought...The title made me recollect about Taylor Swift's Red album...A great write Sara!:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/22/2022 9:05:00 AM

Komal, They are delicious but those that come from the store are as well. They make delicious jam. I will have to look up Taylor Swift. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/21/2022 11:34:00 AM

The trick is to get to a wild ripe raspberry before a mother bear! Enjoyed!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/21/2022 4:21:00 PM

Rico, My husband planted some raspberry vines plus some blackberry vines in the garden so we don't have to deal with bears but we don't have them here except every once in a while one will either stray down from North Georgia or come up out of Florida then disappear from our area for some reason it is not suited to them. Thanks for the visit. Sara