Red-Tail Swoops

red-tail swoops fleeing feeder fledgling falters feathers flying Kathy Collins February 21, 2014

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/21/2014 3:34:00 PM

Brilliantly arranged alliterative 'F's.' ...lotsa activity goin' on here! Well done Kathy!! Love, Keith xo

Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/22/2014 9:37:00 AM

Activity - yes - when those songbirds scatter, you know a hawk is around, xxx's ooo's

Darren Watson

Date: 2/24/2014 6:31:00 PM

Well that's my bird watching done for this week . Can you write one about train spotting next , lol Delightful Kathy , Thanks for sharing .

Kathryn Collins
Date: 2/25/2014 7:02:00 AM

You make me laugh. Train spotting, hmmmmm. Is that done from the wrong side of the tracks? love, Kathy

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/21/2014 10:24:00 AM

I love these!! I have done a few myself. I enjoyed this very much and look forward to more in the future!Asavvy1

Kathryn Collins
Date: 2/21/2014 10:45:00 AM

Thanks Jared. I could find anything to work with red tail. Under strict orders from my beloved husband in heaven I couldn't use falcon to fit. It would be inaccurate since they don't usually lurk around bird feeders. I'll try doing more. love, Kathy