Re:Creation Time

took me thirteen point eight billion years to get here ~ to find sloth a sin By David Kavanagh

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/5/2022 9:05:00 AM

After so many billions of years traveling to Planet Earth, only to find sloth a sin, i would agree with you that it is definitely time for re-creation. OH you are so clever with you monokus David. Hugs and blessings my friend. Jennifer.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/5/2022 1:02:00 PM

Ah you got my wordplay title Jennifer, amazing how fast billions of years of time went by before we got here, it gives me such a big hunch about eternity, cheers David

Bill Baker

Date: 7/29/2022 6:06:00 AM

Nice Monoku, David. I like your thinking as shown in this poem. Write On my friend! Bill

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/3/2022 2:57:00 AM

Thank you Bill, sorry it took me so long to reply, a slothful response indeed, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/27/2022 12:49:00 PM

It's no wonder you prefer staying up in trees, far away from the madding crowd. I can't find fault with you for that. Let them call you lazy.

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/27/2022 2:01:00 PM

Thanks I think Jenna, but really its a jungle below, who wants to mix with that lot, the sloth knows best, This one is just about me trying to perceive time on a universal scale, but it’s really all relative to the observer, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/27/2022 11:04:00 AM

Lol, a rude awakening David, we all need those sloth moments from time to time. Hope your week is going well. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/27/2022 11:43:00 AM

Week is going relatively slow Tom, considering the 13.8 billion years since creation went by in the blink of an eye Lol, makes one wonder, Cheers David