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The farm
     and the porch light hums 
the sound of another 
orange dawn.

Burnt up – crisp
      aching new reaches 
of the imagination turn 
from corn
      to wheat
to the pungent shade
of dried blood on hands –
kissing corners of a mouth
never kissed.

Sweeping ‘cross in whispers 
two thousand years
      and more, come
words on the flat-line horizon,
dripping sideways,
like a red cat's eye marble 
on a circular seesaw
that knows no bounds;
rolling infinitely back
     and forth - 
ringing through ears that were once
in that ago (can you hear it?)
hearing the coming of a storm 
     being heard 
by another set of ears,
in some other when –

     some other marble.

When, speaks the unspoken.
When, treads where none may tread.
When, grips the barren outcroppings of space –
playing the unending moments –
where no other question hence forth

can grip.

Night sounds come in floods
of mauve,
      and quiet apricot;
slicing through oceans,
unsung,
      where no ears hear.

The farm: echoing, lowing and fawning –
Trying to stay true 
      to form,
bleeds into the fibers of a dream
once lived –
recognizing its existence
through the act of a moment, 
      lived.

The girl turns to face 
the enormity
of all she has yet to hear upon 
      the brazen, blazing horizon;
she strips down to goose bumps 
on the skin
that God gave her; 
opening her mouth to hear all
that she is –
 
      breathing in the dawn 
as it breaks.

The farm notes this coming.

The sky knows;

The wind knows.

The earth knows - relaxing
at her feet
      exhaling
through her soles,
resounding through the mouth
of the un-kissed,

breathing through this land; 
humming through porch lights,
spinning through atoms,
sifting though heavens,
recorded through lifetimes,
      and through into another’s
open mouth.




© Kristin Reynolds 1/9/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Breese Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 4:57 PM
Very nice. Actually that's how I feel whenever I go to Gettysburg. :)
Roth Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 8:26 PM
This is a great poem. I enjoyed reading it.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 1:15 PM
Hello Kristin Reynolds, this poem is awsome! Have a nice day my friend.
Breedt Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 2:34 AM
Kristin . Brilliant!! Magnificent!!. This poem can take you there. Damn ! Now I have to read your others too. ..
Moribund Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Greetins Kristin: FANTASTIC poem!!! WOW!!! Have a wonderful day. Peace: Sheol
Culverhouse Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 5:31 PM
congrats on the BIG win!
Smith Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 12:17 PM
wow that is so good i could never win a contest with competition like that:( very amazing poem.
Maughan Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 11:54 AM
WOW! awesome write.... captures you from the first word to the last! Congrats! Hugs, Robin
Lewis Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 7:16 AM
genius this is far from
Lokken Avatar
October 25, 2009 at 5:00 PM
Congrads on your win to this genius piece! Love, Sara
Goff Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 4:02 PM
magical! Kristin! congratulations!... jim
Guzzi Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 9:43 AM
Marvelous journey this verse takes us on. A free form roller coaster ride of tradgedy and joy and the reality of Earth..Mother. Light & Love OH Famous One!
Austin Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 7:38 AM
Congrats on your first place win, Kristin. Love, daver
Freakasso Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations Kristin on your winning the June soup contest.I loved the read,wonderful words of a different creed.Hope to hear of many more,you walking on that victory shore. God Bless, PRINCE
Loving Iii Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 2:07 PM
congradulations for this masterfully done piece. you've shown dawn in a compleatly new light. John H Loving III
Mckenzie Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 12:18 PM
Kristin~Congratulations I've been gone awhile and just noticed you won first place! Not surprised at all wow what an honor for you, Reach to the skies!!! Great job! Laura:)
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October 19, 2009 at 4:40 AM
Kristin, Congratulations on your first place win in the Poetry Soup June 2009 contest. Your poem is magnificent and worthy not only of this win, but also of praises from the heavens for well spoken reminders that we must live well, choose right, and love one another... There is a judgment day coming. Excellent! Lovingly, Dane Ann
George   Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 2:21 AM
Dear Kisten, This literally took my breath away. You are a BRILLIANT WRITER. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win. Love, Lainie
Yamin Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 4:41 PM
Kristin! Heartiest congratulations on your enchanting poem winning the contest of the PoetrySoup. I wish you many more successes in times to come. -Mohammad
Okubo Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 9:09 AM
Congrats Kristin on this well deserved win. This is an absolutely excellent write. Meg.
Caliri Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 9:07 PM
Stunning, and erotic and spiritual, an unlikely and invigorating dance! This is awesome! I wanna go to the farm! Take me to the farm! I'll kiss whoever you want me to!!! Oh, and congrats on no. 1!
La France Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 6:40 PM
congratulations on your first place.. wonderful
Augustus Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 1:12 PM
Congratulations on your first place win in the Poetry Soup contest!
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October 15, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on you first place finish in the Poetry Soup contest Kristin! Way to go! A well deserved tribute for a talented writer. Enjoy your big win!!! Karen
Winter Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 11:12 AM
WooHoooooooo!!!! BIG CONGRATS!!!!! WELL DESERVED AND SOOOOOOOOO HAPPY FOR YOU!!!! XOXOXOXOXOXOXO I am smiling so BIG : )))
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